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Daphne
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« Reply #75 on: May 20, 2025, 11:23:57 am »

Thanks for the typo reports!
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« Reply #76 on: May 22, 2025, 06:26:32 pm »

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Starter Marriage
   
A Phone Pings
   ⇝ Now is not the time.
She turns around as the phone gives...
   ⇝ Speed up, fucking her harder.
Allison is a very good fuck; she...
   ⇝ Keep going, but slow down and delay your orgasm.
Allison always seems to be hunting...
   ⇝ This is perfect, just the right speed... keep going.
Allison does need a lot of foreplay...
   ⇝ Speed up; you can feel how much she wants it.
And Allison is kinky in her own...
   ⇝ Come in her. You need it.
You give a low moan as you come...
   ⇝ "Nothing important. Now, we both have big days tomorrow."
"Thank you for a lovely evening...
   ⇝ The next morning you get up a bit earlier than usual.
Memory Lane
   
Allison is already up and out of bed...
   ⇝ You find one that reminds you of wait. You hear familiar noises from the shower.
Allison is in the shower. This is...

In the show Allison mimics "the blowjob she gave you last night," but she did not in fact do that. Unless it was before the start of the narrative, I guess.
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« Reply #77 on: May 22, 2025, 06:48:38 pm »

In the show Allison mimics "the blowjob she gave you last night," but she did not in fact do that. Unless it was before the start of the narrative, I guess.

Could I see the whole playthrough? I can't reproduce that or see how the code could produce it.
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« Reply #78 on: May 22, 2025, 07:27:42 pm »

Sure. I did just re-check it and get the same result.

Quote
   
A Phone Pings
   ⇝ Now is not the time.
She turns around as the phone gives...
   ⇝ Speed up, fucking her harder.
Allison is a very good fuck; she...
   ⇝ Keep going, but slow down and delay your orgasm.
Allison always seems to be hunting...
   ⇝ This is perfect, just the right speed... keep going.
Allison does need a lot of foreplay...
   ⇝ Speed up; you can feel how much she wants it.
And Allison is kinky in her own...
   ⇝ Come in her. You need it.
You give a low moan as you come...
   ⇝ "Nothing important. Now, we both have big days tomorrow."
"Thank you for a lovely evening...
   ⇝ The next morning you get up a bit earlier than usual.
Memory Lane
   
Allison is already up and out of bed...
   ⇝ You find one that reminds you of wait. You hear familiar noises from the shower.
Allison is in the shower. This is...
   ⇝ You wander off to set out breakfast.
At breakfast, Allison asks, "What...
   ⇝ Call Annie.
You take a deep breath, and push...
   ⇝ Then you head off to work.
Just as you sit down at work, you...
   ⇝ Yeah, kinda still pissed. What's up?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ The guy you left me for?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ So, why get in touch now?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ Let me think about it.
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ Then you get to work; it's better to talk with Allison about this in person.
You arrive back at the apartment...
   ⇝ Time for you to talk about the texts with Annie.
Before things continue, you bring up...
   ⇝ "I'm not going. That relationship is over."
Allison nods. "No matter what you...
   ⇝ ... text Annie that you can't come.
You excuse yourself to the bathroom...
   ⇝ Then you go back to the bedroom.
You come back into the bedroom...
   ⇝ The next morning you wake up alone.
The Butterfly Effect
   
The Butterfly Effect
   ⇝ You check your phone.
I understand, but...please?
   ⇝ After what you did to me? How can you even ask?
I understand, but...please? After...
   ⇝ It's a bit late for make-up sex.
I understand, but...please? After...
   ⇝ To be honest, the sex is the most tempting part.
I understand, but...please? After...
   ⇝ Really?
I understand, but...please? After...
   ⇝ I'll come. And I will hold you to that.
I understand, but...please? After...
   ⇝ And then you call Allison.
"Hello," she says, her voice sultry...
   ⇝ ... head off to work.
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Wanted to remind them I work here. What are you up to?"
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "She's doing great! How's... I'm sorry, I've forgotten his name."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Oh, I'm sorry!"
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "What happened?"
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "We should grab coffee sometime. Away from work."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "She and I have an understanding."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ And then you get back to work.
You can smell a hint of Emma's...
   ⇝ And then you work until it's time to head home.
When you get home, to make your way...
   ⇝ You help her up, and head to dinner.
As you drive to dinner, you chat...
   ⇝ You knock.
You really do like Dante and Renée...
   ⇝ "Oh! Let me help."
You help carry the dishes into the...
   ⇝ "Things are great. Better than ever."
You help carry the dishes into the...
   ⇝ "I think we are, now."
You help carry the dishes into the...
   ⇝ "How can I say no to that?"
"I was hoping you'd say yes," she...
   ⇝ You follow her back to the living room.
As you come into the living room...
   ⇝ You bring up your trip.
You tell them you are going out to...
   ⇝ As the evening winds down, you say your goodbyes.
As you walk to the car, your eye is...
   ⇝ You turn to point her out to Allison.
The Girlfriend Experience
   
You turn to Allison. "Look. Over...
   ⇝ You head to the car.
You get to the car, and open the...
   ⇝ "Do you want to fuck him?"
"If my Master permits... yes, I...
   ⇝ "She offered me a blowjob, and I accepted."
"If my Master permits... yes, I...
   ⇝ "Next time, I'll order you to join us."
She leans the car seat back. "God, I...
   ⇝ You ask, "Then, how about a roadside blowjob?"
No hesitation. "Yes, Master." You...
   ⇝ You finish the drive home.
The moment the door is closed...
   ⇝ Excuse yourself to the bathroom.
You break off, and look into her...
   ⇝ ... join Allison in the bedroom.
Allison is waiting for you on the...
   ⇝ "With pleasure, slave."
Even though you've already been...
   ⇝ You decide to explore her being your sex-slave.
Even though you've already been...
   ⇝ Then you focus on what you are doing with her.
You decide on a position change. You...
   ⇝ Then say, "I want to come all over you."
You move into position as she closes...
   ⇝ ... hand her a towel.
"Thank you, Master." She gets the...
   ⇝ And then you dream.
he thought you didn't know
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
she got so turned on giving a lap dance
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
coming home to them
   ⇝ And then during the night...
Relationship Goals
   
Later that night, you awaken...
   ⇝ The next morning at breakfast...
As you come into the kitchen...
   ⇝ "I don't think I have the time to do you properly."
She looks slightly disappointed, but...
   ⇝ "I might see Renée for coffee this afternoon."
Allison gives you a smirk. "Is this...
   ⇝ say, "Come here and drop, slave."
She smiles, and gives you a small...
   ⇝ You come in her mouth.
She knows you are getting close, and...
   ⇝ You hand her a napkin.
"Thank you, sir," she says, taking...
   ⇝ ... stand and collect your dishes from the table.
As she stands up, she says...
   ⇝ You head to work.
As you sit down at work, your phone...
   ⇝ You text Allison.
You are an amazing cocksucker. Thank...
   ⇝ And then you text Renée back.
hi it's renee had fun coffee...
   ⇝ And then you text Annie back.
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ I'm looking forward to seeing you, but...
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ I didn't get a hotel room.
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ All is forgiven.
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ I'll just accept my apology in sexual favors.
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