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« Reply #60 on: May 18, 2025, 04:17:48 am »

In that same scene, or later in "Relationship Goals"?

Same scene, 2 screens apart

Yes, that's a possible and intended path. She just changes her mind.
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« Reply #61 on: May 18, 2025, 09:49:27 am »

In that same scene, or later in "Relationship Goals"?

Same scene, 2 screens apart

Oh, sorry… I just realized the whole path wasn’t included in the post. I’ll see if I can repro it with better completeness.
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« Reply #62 on: May 18, 2025, 09:04:42 pm »

In that same scene, or later in "Relationship Goals"?
Same scene, 2 screens apart
Yes, that's a possible and intended path. She just changes her mind.
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« Reply #63 on: May 19, 2025, 05:57:33 am »

Here's an odd one found while trying to explore choices I don't usually opt for:

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As you sit down at work, your phone vibrates.

From Lorelei. Just a few minutes ago.

See you very soon.

It has been a while since you've seen her, and you should at least update her about your contact with Annie.

Options given are text Allison, text Paula, text Renée back. However the game hasn't indicated that Renée texted you (there was a buzz last night you ignored in favor of screwing Allison). Also, you just met Lorelei the day before, spoke about Annie and how you turned her down, and then had sex.

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« Reply #64 on: May 19, 2025, 06:08:38 am »

Actually I'm going to include the full path because there's a second weird thing, which is that at the end of the pre-dinner conversation, Allison goes off to 'freshen up' before dinner. Cut to her naked at dinner, which goes uncommented on, which seems like a text fragment which should appear doesn't (though of course I can't be certain).  And finally I see a typo in one spot just now, yousay for 'you say'

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Starter Marriage
   
A Phone Pings
   ⇝ Now is not the time.
She turns around as the phone gives...
   ⇝ Speed up, fucking her harder.
Allison is a very good fuck; she...
   ⇝ Keep going, but slow down and delay your orgasm.
Allison always seems to be hunting...
   ⇝ This is perfect, just the right speed... keep going.
Allison does need a lot of foreplay...
   ⇝ Speed up; you can feel how much she wants it.
And Allison is kinky in her own...
   ⇝ Keep going; this feels incredible tonight.
You flash back to one of your first...
   ⇝ It's too much. You can't hold your orgasm back anymore.
You give a low moan as you come...
   ⇝ "Nothing important. Now, we both have big days tomorrow."
"Thank you for a lovely evening...
   ⇝ The next morning you decide to sleep in.
Memory Lane
   
Allison is already up and out of bed...
   ⇝ You find one that reminds you of wait. You hear familiar noises from the shower.
Allison is in the shower. This is...
   ⇝ You wander off to set out breakfast.
At breakfast, Allison asks, "What...
   ⇝ Call a friend who might know what's up.
To your amazement, Lorelei actually...
   ⇝ Then you head off to work.
Just as you sit down at work, you...
   ⇝ I could never say no to you.
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« Reply #65 on: May 19, 2025, 06:13:52 am »

Not sure if this is a bug, but there are a few scenes where Alison claims to be heading into the bedroom and is, in fact heading into the kitchen.

Not a bug. There is some reused artwork that will be replaced eventually.

Gotcha.   In some of the other scene's it actually looks like the bedroom might be hung off the kitchen.

I am now wondering whether this is all taking place in New Orleans (since the New Orleans shotgun houses are one of the only ones I know of they are laid out like that)
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« Reply #66 on: May 19, 2025, 06:39:30 am »

Actually I'm going to include the full path

It looks like the path got cut off. Could I get the full one?
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« Reply #67 on: May 19, 2025, 06:56:03 am »

Argh the preview indicates the whole thing was pasted in but then it truncates between preview and post!

Edit: it's the emojis messing it up somehow
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« Reply #68 on: May 19, 2025, 06:57:36 am »

Emojis removed by hand
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Starter Marriage
   
A Phone Pings
   ⇝ Now is not the time.
She turns around as the phone gives...
   ⇝ Speed up, fucking her harder.
Allison is a very good fuck; she...
   ⇝ Keep going, but slow down and delay your orgasm.
Allison always seems to be hunting...
   ⇝ This is perfect, just the right speed... keep going.
Allison does need a lot of foreplay...
   ⇝ Speed up; you can feel how much she wants it.
And Allison is kinky in her own...
   ⇝ Keep going; this feels incredible tonight.
You flash back to one of your first...
   ⇝ It's too much. You can't hold your orgasm back anymore.
You give a low moan as you come...
   ⇝ "Nothing important. Now, we both have big days tomorrow."
"Thank you for a lovely evening...
   ⇝ The next morning you decide to sleep in.
Memory Lane
   
Allison is already up and out of bed...
   ⇝ You find one that reminds you of wait. You hear familiar noises from the shower.
Allison is in the shower. This is...
   ⇝ You wander off to set out breakfast.
At breakfast, Allison asks, "What...
   ⇝ Call a friend who might know what's up.
To your amazement, Lorelei actually...
   ⇝ Then you head off to work.
Just as you sit down at work, you...
   ⇝ I could never say no to you.  What's going on?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ The guy you left me for?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ What can I do to I mean for you?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ I need to talk with my GF first.
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ Then you get to work; it's better to talk with Allison about this in person.
You arrive back at the apartment...
   ⇝ Time for bed. The situation with Annie can wait.
You strip quickly, and you lie down...
   ⇝ ... cuddle up to Allison for the night.
There's a moment of silence. Her...
   ⇝ The next morning you wake up alone.
The Butterfly Effect
   
The Butterfly Effect
   ⇝ You check your phone.
Any news?
   ⇝ I want to. But it's taking a big risk.
Any news? I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ You're awfully tempting.
Any news? I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ The sex is the most tempting part.
Any news? I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ Really?
Any news? I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ I'm sorry. I love you, but I can't.
Any news? I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ You reply call Allison.
"Hello," she says, her voice sultry...
   ⇝ ... text Lorelei.
Hey. Can we get together today? I...
   ⇝ Annie.
Hey. Can we get together today? I...
   ⇝ Perfect. See you then.
Hey. Can we get together today? I...
   ⇝ You reply head to work.
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Wanted to remind them I work here. What are you up to?"
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "She's doing great! How's... I'm sorry, I've forgotten his name."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Oh, I'm sorry!"
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "We should grab coffee sometime. Away from work."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Of course! I think you two would get along great."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ You say get back to work.
You can smell a hint of Emma's...
   ⇝ And then you work until it's time for your date with Lorelei.
You and Lorelei have been friends...
   ⇝ You bring up the situation with Annie.
You pause before you speak. "I'm not...
   ⇝ "Her new guy left, and she's panicking?"
You pause before you speak. "I'm not...
   ⇝ "As if that wasn't enough, I have a coworker..."
You pause before you speak. "I'm not...
   ⇝ "And now, about us."
You pause before you speak. "I'm not...
   ⇝ "You're right. I need to tell her. I'll talk to her tonight."
You pause before you speak. "I'm not...
   ⇝ You reply you wait for her summons.
The summons is not long in coming...
   ⇝ You slide onto the bed and start fingering her.
She needs no encouragement as you...
   ⇝ You ask her to go down on you.
You lie back. Although she is happy...
   ⇝ And then you take her.
You take your position on top of...
   ⇝ And then you you slowly pull out.
You reach over, grab a towel from a...
   ⇝ And then you head home.
When you get home, to make your way...
   ⇝ You help her up, and head to dinner.
You help Allison into her coat...
   ⇝ You knock.
You really do like Dante and Renée...
   ⇝ "Excuse me for a moment." You duck to the bathroom.
It's from Lorelei. I had a lovely...
   ⇝ So, you follow Renée into the kitchen, having left the ring.
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "How did you know about that?"
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "Getting to bang her again was tempting, but..."
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "She was more than just accepting."
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "I think that would be wise. Scientific curiosity."
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "I want to come in your mouth."
"Please do come in my mouth," she...
   ⇝ You follow her back to the living room.
As you come into the living room...
   ⇝ You return to the subject of Renée's boobs.
As Renée sits down, you compliment...
   ⇝ As the evening winds down, you say your goodbyes.
As you walk to the car, your eye is...
   ⇝ You turn to point her out to Allison.
The Girlfriend Experience
   
You turn to Allison. "Look. Over...
   ⇝ You head to the car.
You get to the car, and open the...
   ⇝ "She offered me a blowjob, and I accepted."
"That was a bit more than I had in...
   ⇝ "Is everything OK? You've been acting different lately."
"That was a bit more than I had in...
   ⇝ say, "Well, then, roadside blowjob?"
No hesitation. "Yes, Master." You...
   ⇝ You finish the drive home.
The moment the door is closed...
   ⇝ Excuse yourself to the bathroom.
You break off, and look into her...
   ⇝ ... join Allison in the bedroom.
Allison is waiting for you on the...
   ⇝ "With pleasure, slave."
Even though you've already been...
   ⇝ You decide to explore her being your sex-slave.
Even though you've already been...
   ⇝ Then you focus on what you are doing with her.
You decide on a position change. You...
   ⇝ Then say, "I want to come on your tits."
You move into position as she closes...
   ⇝ ... hand her a towel.
"Thank you, Master." She gets the...
   ⇝ And then you dream.
she was always so hot for you
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
he thought you didn't know
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
right up on the meeting room table
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
she got so turned on giving a lap dance
   ⇝ And then the next morning...
Relationship Goals
   
As you come into the kitchen...
   ⇝ "I only have time for a blowjob, slave."
She smiles, and gives you a small...
   ⇝ You come in her mouth.
She knows you are getting close, and...
   ⇝ You hand her a napkin.
"Thank you, sir," she says, taking...
   ⇝ ... stand and collect your dishes from the table.
As she stands up, she says...
   ⇝ You head to work.
As you sit down at work, your phone...
   ⇝ You text Renée back.
hi it's renee had fun coffee...
   ⇝ And then you text Paula.
Hey, it's me. Is this still your...
   ⇝ And then you text Allison.
You are an amazing cocksucker. Thank...
   ⇝ And then you hear a familiar voice behind you.
"Up for coffee this afternoon?" Emma...
   ⇝ You work until work until it's time for coffee with Emma.
You realize you hadn't actually...
   ⇝ "We're at a party Saturday, but maybe Sunday?"
You realize you hadn't actually...
   ⇝ "It's... well, kind of a play party."
You realize you hadn't actually...
   ⇝ "Well, I have a date with an incredibly hot woman coming up..."
You realize you hadn't actually...
   ⇝ You reply see Renée walk into the coffee house.
Renée bounces (quite literally...
   ⇝ "I'm glad you and Lorelei stayed in touch."
Renée bounces (quite literally...
   ⇝ "We're really looking forward to the party."
Renée bounces (quite literally...
   ⇝ "Your new breasts look amazing."
Renée bounces (quite literally...
   ⇝ "Purely out of appreciation for their beauty."
Renée bounces (quite literally...
   ⇝ "Thank you for a great time in the kitchen."
Renée bounces (quite literally...
   ⇝ "So, anything else new in your world?"
You two continue to chit-chat for a...
   ⇝ You then update Allison.
So, I had coffee with Emma. And...
   ⇝ Get back to work.
Work is even more mind-numbing than...
   ⇝ You work until it's time to head home.
As you head home, you get a text...
   ⇝ You go in.
She's sitting on the couch, and...
   ⇝ Yousay, "Of course! What's wrong?"
"OK, you promise you won't think I'm...
   ⇝ "What else has been going on?"
"OK, you promise you won't think I'm...
   ⇝ "You just need a distraction, like sucking my cock."
"OK, you promise you won't think I'm...
   ⇝ You say, "I want to come in your mouth."
"OK, you promise you won't think I'm...
   ⇝ You stand, and help her up.
"OK, you promise you won't think I'm...
   ⇝ You go to the kitchen.
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« Reply #69 on: May 19, 2025, 09:44:33 am »

I should stop screwing around with this but:

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"Like, love spells?" You hope your voice is staying serious.

Her voice certainly is. "Yes."

You've knew there was something witchy about Lorelei, but apparently now is the time to actually test it. You see why Renée cautioned against getting on Lorelei's bad side. You think that you have just wandered into one of Lorelei's stories, but decide to plow ahead.

Off "I will consider this," the conversation abruptly skips a track.

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"Yes, that's correct. You and Allison will be attending as well, I understand?"

"That's the plan."

"I will be having sex with other men and women there, including Dante. Is that going to bother you?"

"I can't imagine why. And if it does, it's my problem to deal with."
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« Reply #70 on: May 19, 2025, 10:06:00 am »

Not sure if this is a bug, but there are a few scenes where Alison claims to be heading into the bedroom and is, in fact heading into the kitchen.

Not a bug. There is some reused artwork that will be replaced eventually.

Thanks

I wonder if we have now established that Starter Marriage is taking place in New Orleans since I have seen other pictures that suggest that the bedroom is indeed slung off the kitchen (and the only type of house that I am familiar with that uses that type of layout are so-called "shotgun" houses in New Orleans...
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« Reply #71 on: May 19, 2025, 10:13:47 am »

I wonder if we have now established that Starter Marriage is taking place in New Orleans since I have seen other pictures that suggest that the bedroom is indeed slung off the kitchen (and the only type of house that I am familiar with that uses that type of layout are so-called "shotgun" houses in New Orleans...

No comment on that one. :-)
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« Reply #72 on: May 19, 2025, 10:15:07 am »

Thank you for the bug reports, jwik01!
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« Reply #73 on: May 20, 2025, 08:23:49 am »

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"I'd very much appreciate that," she says. "I really do not want to hurt anyone's feelings or cause drama."

"I'll ask her tonight. I'll have her text her so you know it's from her."

Emma laughs. "I trust you to pass the information along honestly, but whatever works for the two of you."

Should probably be "I'll have her text you so you know it's from her."
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« Reply #74 on: May 20, 2025, 10:59:18 am »

typo:

She is wild, fucking back fast and hard. "Please fuck yes fuck your slut your whore I'm such a slutty cunt please fuck me Master I'll do anything you want just fuck your slutty fucking whore..." You've never heard anythihg like this from her before.
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