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« on: March 19, 2012, 11:06:20 am » |
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As his cock grows, Laura's husband's confidence grows as well... perhaps a bit too confident for her comfort...  Coming March 28th! |
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« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2012, 08:38:41 am » |
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« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2012, 06:56:34 am » |
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I think the answer to your question is yes.
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« Reply #3 on: March 23, 2012, 07:10:44 pm » |
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Is the answer A or B?
Yes.
Those are the kind of multiple choice questions I hated in school. However, this situation promises to be entertaining.
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« Reply #4 on: March 28, 2012, 06:18:32 am » |
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Not posted yet?
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« Reply #5 on: March 28, 2012, 06:38:36 am » |
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I had to use a direct link to get to it. I'm sure Daphne will get it fixed soon.  Issue 2 was better than the first issue, so well done to the Bigger team! I love how the wife's will is slowly crumbling as she accepts his use of other women. Good stuff.  |
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« Last Edit: March 28, 2012, 06:46:56 am by stormrazor2000 »
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« Reply #6 on: March 28, 2012, 07:25:57 am » |
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It's fixed.
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« Reply #7 on: March 28, 2012, 10:27:01 am » |
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Nice job on this, but after that one SJI episode I have to make this comment. The Hypno-cock returnes!
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« Reply #8 on: March 28, 2012, 11:18:29 am » |
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Wonderful story! Part 2 explained the picture of the woman kneeling. I kept saying to myself..."it doesnt look like the office manager". |
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Yippee ki yay!
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« Reply #9 on: March 28, 2012, 12:15:57 pm » |
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Nice job on this, but after that one SJI episode I have to make this comment. The Hypno-cock returnes!
Sometimes, themes cluster together. |
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« Reply #10 on: March 28, 2012, 05:42:44 pm » |
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Great job! Really love how the story is progressing, looking forward to the next issue!
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« Reply #11 on: March 28, 2012, 07:33:53 pm » |
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« Reply #12 on: April 03, 2012, 02:36:29 pm » |
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Likes:
Good intentioned start spiralling out of (or into, depending on perspective) control.
Establishment of characters (faithful, intimate).
Dislikes:
Sharp drop off the jerk end for Kurt (too cocky too fast?)
Challenging to tell one woman from the next (stream of consciousness narrative, maybe - plus art style).
Definitely want to see more. The likes far outweigh the dislikes. I'd really like to see some pull-back on Kurt's fall into jerktitude. Maybe some tiny bit of guilt after he's messed up his faithful, supportive wife. You know, he wants to do something they used to love doing but all she wants to do is ... dance. Or she's responsible for doing something important (like her job) and stops caring - much preferring to be a "good little whore."
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If you love something, analyze it and share.
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« Reply #13 on: April 04, 2012, 05:36:49 am » |
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lol, "cocky" |
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« Reply #14 on: April 15, 2012, 07:37:29 am » |
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It's the stream of consciousness intercut that's most problematic.
This is another attempt at the "power corrupts" character arc, something I know PK really likes and the characters are (or were) better here than in Pwned, but again if we're going to do this arc it's important not to go from
"That's a nice guy who lucked out" to
"Someone drop a safe on that jerk's head" in the first two issues. If you absolutely must use this arc, please make it more gradual.
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