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« on: December 14, 2020, 10:14:31 am » |
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 Your ex-wife gets in touch with you after years of silence… but what does she really want?We're very happy to introduce our first Multipath Story... an illustrated story where you pick your own path through it. We hope you enjoy it! |
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« Reply #1 on: December 15, 2020, 10:59:29 am » |
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"Story and code"?
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"And I want to reach in to the fire of your heart/I want to program all those beats right from the start"
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« Reply #2 on: December 16, 2020, 09:11:54 am » |
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That is REALLY impressive work! These things seldom have real branches. And the transitions are elegantly done. The story so far is hot as hell. Nicely done.
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« Reply #3 on: December 16, 2020, 09:25:16 am » |
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That is REALLY impressive work! These things seldom have real branches. And the transitions are elegantly done. The story so far is hot as hell. Nicely done.
I'm in complete agreement. Sterling work, Daphne! Thanks. |
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« Reply #4 on: December 16, 2020, 10:18:00 am » |
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This pretty great! Is there a way to start over from the beginning and try different paths? Once I came to the end it wouldn’t let me go back to the start.
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« Reply #5 on: December 16, 2020, 10:36:47 am » |
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This pretty great! Is there a way to start over from the beginning and try different paths? Once I came to the end it wouldn’t let me go back to the start.
If, at then end, you go back to the start of the chapter, you can then go back to the start of the story from there. |
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« Reply #6 on: December 16, 2020, 11:33:41 am » |
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This was very good so far! Good art and steamy sex, but, most importantly, good characterization. I already feel like I have a good idea of who Annie and Allison are, with some hints about Lorelei (her in a tux at the wedding definitely lets you know what kind of woman she is). No explicit mind control yet, but there are implications, and I'm sure it's coming.
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"And I want to reach in to the fire of your heart/I want to program all those beats right from the start"
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« Reply #7 on: December 16, 2020, 01:43:15 pm » |
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Thank you all for the kind words! It was a ton of fun to do. And, of course, PK and Maksim did a wonderful job on the art.
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« Reply #8 on: December 16, 2020, 02:47:03 pm » |
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A very nice CYOA
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« Reply #9 on: December 16, 2020, 02:55:22 pm » |
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A very nice CYOA
Multipath story, please. :-) |
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« Reply #10 on: December 16, 2020, 07:39:38 pm » |
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How often will this update? I want more, please.
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« Reply #11 on: December 16, 2020, 09:16:59 pm » |
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Going to take a while to work all the way through this.
Do choices cross over between chapters?
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« Reply #12 on: December 16, 2020, 09:22:21 pm » |
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This ruled
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« Reply #13 on: December 16, 2020, 09:34:55 pm » |
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Do choices cross over between chapters?
Yes! |
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« Reply #14 on: December 17, 2020, 01:00:50 am » |
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That was very intriguing. I liked it quite a bit.
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