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« on: December 15, 2011, 12:02:13 pm » |
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Irena has been saved by centaurs from the satyrs (as her boyfriend is busily romping with the nymphs), but is she really save from further ravagement? Hello? Centaurs?Coming December 21st!
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« Reply #1 on: December 15, 2011, 05:22:33 pm » |
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So there is a part 2
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« Reply #2 on: December 21, 2011, 12:59:20 am » |
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I hate to nitpick, but... I really hope you mean "ravish", not "ravage". ...unless this is that kinda story...
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« Reply #3 on: December 21, 2011, 01:06:52 am » |
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"Ravage" and "ravish" are synonyms in that sense of the word.
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« Reply #4 on: December 21, 2011, 10:08:48 am » |
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Ok, I must have missed something, but I thought he couldn't use all three apples on her? Only one would take effect and "The others would be lost to her" But she seemed to be under the effect of all three at the end.
Other than that it was a fun and well drawn/colored issue. Thanks!
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« Reply #5 on: December 21, 2011, 10:38:36 am » |
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Ok, I must have missed something, but I thought he couldn't use all three apples on her? Only one would take effect and "The others would be lost to her" But she seemed to be under the effect of all three at the end.
I think the idea is, as soon as she eats one of the apples, the other two become ineffective--so he fed her all three simultaneously, by baking them in a cobbler. So all three took effect at the same time.
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« Reply #6 on: December 21, 2011, 01:02:12 pm » |
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I really like the art on this one; the female character looked terrific, great facial expression, body stayed in proportion from panel to panel. Quite enjoyable. Can't say that I wouldn't have enjoyed some interaction with the centaur though.
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« Reply #7 on: December 21, 2011, 02:55:22 pm » |
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Ok, I must have missed something, but I thought he couldn't use all three apples on her? Only one would take effect and "The others would be lost to her" But she seemed to be under the effect of all three at the end.
I think the idea is, as soon as she eats one of the apples, the other two become ineffective--so he fed her all three simultaneously, by baking them in a cobbler. So all three took effect at the same time. Aha! You are far more clever than I!
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« Reply #8 on: December 22, 2011, 01:17:30 am » |
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What? No centaur rape? Oh, you tease.
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« Reply #9 on: December 27, 2011, 07:00:13 am » |
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MOAR!
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« Reply #10 on: December 28, 2011, 11:37:19 pm » |
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MOAR!
YES! Though with fewer or no jokes.
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« Reply #11 on: December 28, 2011, 11:47:23 pm » |
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MOAR!
YES! Though with fewer or no jokes. Really? I thought that was kind of the point for this one.
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« Reply #12 on: December 29, 2011, 01:53:35 pm » |
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MOAR!
YES! Though with fewer or no jokes. Really? I thought that was kind of the point for this one. There's no right or wrong answer on either the author's or the reader's part, it's just a matter of taste. For me there were too many, it got distracting, and diffused the hotness of the power/control parts. (I feel this way about not all, but quite a lot of the humor on the site -- there's too much for me.) EDIT: To be a little more specific/articulate, I'm pretty much okay with the humor in this story except for the one-page sex scene panels between the girl and Zeus. That just had too many jokes for me, and brought the whole story's hotness down for than I'd have liked. And I'm definitely not here for humor, but for hotness.
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« Reply #13 on: December 29, 2011, 02:41:37 pm » |
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On the other hand, I like the humor in this one. And I think it helped the story. I'm hoping there is a number 3...
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« Reply #14 on: December 29, 2011, 05:22:21 pm » |
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Count me in amongst the humor fans.
Mythological Greeks offering mortal men a selection of three choices involving apples has a poor track record in the long run, even if initial results show promise, so I could see the potential for followups.
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