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Author Topic: Free Cable #7  (Read 12255 times)
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« on: February 19, 2015, 01:39:54 pm »

Great for a starter home.

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« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2015, 11:03:08 am »

Can't wait to see what happens to this cute redhead.
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« Reply #2 on: February 21, 2015, 01:09:27 pm »

young woman becoming a full body woman.
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« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2015, 10:16:59 pm »

Wait, what's with the tagline?  I thought a "starter home" was a house, a typical first house for a young or first-time owner that could either be expanded as a family grew or sold for capital to buy a more posh residence (of course that concept pretty much hit obsolescence in 2007-8).  A rented apartment isn't that sort of asset.  Is he expanding to duplexes or neighborhoods now, and not just an apartment building here or there?
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« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2015, 08:24:54 am »

o why the change the story?
First story about 19 year old teenage
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« Reply #5 on: March 08, 2015, 10:50:06 am »

A starter home these days is not what it used to be.
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« Reply #6 on: March 08, 2015, 02:59:37 pm »

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« Reply #7 on: March 08, 2015, 03:02:26 pm »

The image above has for some reason been replaced with the cover of episode six. Weighing everything up, I don't think we should take this to mean that they're going to publish episode six again instead of seven.

I dunno, that was a pretty good episode.
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« Reply #8 on: March 08, 2015, 10:57:44 pm »

Aye, but I'm looking forward to seeing this young lassie again after a few days in the building. It'll be a growth experience, I'm betting.
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« Reply #9 on: March 11, 2015, 12:18:22 am »

Not open up
12:15 am or 00:15
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« Reply #10 on: March 11, 2015, 12:29:38 am »

Not open up
12:15 am or 00:15

Yep, sure is.
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« Reply #11 on: March 11, 2015, 04:11:02 am »

There is (I believe) a word missing in panel 3, which completely changes the sense of what she is saying. "I've been a "Hey let's do it in the road" kind of girl". Is the word "never" missing in there? Would make sense in context with the next line
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« Reply #12 on: March 11, 2015, 05:15:12 am »

Fixed, thanks!
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« Reply #13 on: March 11, 2015, 06:54:35 am »

Interesting new twist on the concept.  You'd almost think that this guy Hal is the new manager or something.
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« Reply #14 on: March 11, 2015, 07:45:47 am »

It also should be "I had been laid off" on the first page.  However, that doesn't really change the tone or meaning of any of the passages.

He might be the new manager, or he might know the manager and is subbing for him as that guy expands his influence.

This was great.  Good story, wonderful, sexy art.  Best of all, the narrator remained coherent throughout, even as she underwent changes.  Spectacular! Grin Grin Grin

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