Paperbag here.
You read my mind, David L!
I have posted a few times about Tribly Else's "Outcall" on the mcforum.
Here are some excerpts:
June 05, 2010:I second "Obedience" and "Rewriting History"!
While we're on authors from mcstories (given their permission), here's my wish list:
Trilby Else ("Outcall", "Leasehold", oh! and "Outcall")
Jukebox ("Nothing Else Matters", "Come As You Are")
Darkmind and Flibinite ("Cow's Bargain", "Everything Must Go")
I'll stop now...
March 20, 2010:Trilby Else's "Outcall" is one of my top three favourite mind control stories ever. For the past fourteen months I have been highly anticipating the next chapter. I don't want to rush genius, but I sincerely hope that Trilby Else continues Jaden's descending saga or at least concludes it in the near future.
The sky's the limit with all the interesting ways to twist the minds of the callgirl and her friends. Perhaps Jaden could think she is Tavia for awhile and think Tavia is Jaden. Or maybe Jaden could think she's a studious college student and attend classes for Fiona's amusement -- only to have Fiona remind Jaden that she's really a hooker. What more outrageous things could Jaden be commanded to do? Sell her apartment and lose her contacts (and memories) of her family and out-of-town friends? Become pregnant accidentally by a client and learn to love the idea of motherhood? How great would it be to make her think she's got her mind back to normal only to be instantly brainwashed! Even have her think she's just Fiona's Slave who has to be conditioned into thinking she's turning into a woman named Jaden.
Hopefully something definitive could be done to Jaden's escort boss Donna -- could she be hypnotized or be another hypnotist or both? Is there anything more for Carol to do? Maybe Jaden could be instructed to train Carol to become a professional hooker and forget her studies. What if Lena or any customer Jaden serviced while hypnotized recognized her by accident and gained control over her for the whole day without Fiona's approval. Maybe Jaden could be videotaped "pretending" to be a hypnotized slave so Fiona could put it on YouTube or sell them on the web. How about a group shoot! I can easily imagine Fiona the hypnotist having her mesmerized college students and escort girls hang out with her in public like a sexy entourage. Have the girls pool all of their money so they can all go traveling with Fiona for the summer. What if we abruptly went ten years in the future to see how everyone is carrying on?
The sky's the limit! Go "Outcall" Go!