"The Persuader"

[Technophyle]

PK et al,Kudo's for a great story and artwork, a really nice "period piece"(60's style), clothes, hair styles etc.

I actually find it a bit temporally-confusing. The male characters look 1970s: hairstyles, bell-bottoms, the wide collars, while the women scream 1960s with the big hair that's short in back.

Not that this surprises me. I can't remember how many parties and such where someone claims they're in a costume that's supposed to be from the 1960s, but actually look like they walked out of a 1970s magazine.

[Michael Moorman]

I hope to see some more about Deborah to put her under his full control

[Michael Moorman]

In all of the storyline is great the way he is hypnotizing women and the art work all of the women look so real is well worth coming here I like to see more of the women being nude even in this storyline or in the restroom both male and female bathrooms.

[Michael Moorman]

the persuader I like to see where the storeline go 100 years in the future

[carmel0]

Great story...lotsa good subplots to explore in the future...a.) what's in store for Deborah; b.) what does his boss "understand"; c.) Heidi's efficiency as his secretary; d.) Patricia and the professor; e.) and of course the afternoon breaks with Barbara.  Looking forward to the next story.