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« Reply #90 on: June 09, 2025, 07:12:39 am » |
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In the path posted by BenHur in the flow thread, you propsition Lorelie twice back to back and get the identical rejection. This is in response to both "I would like to focus on the woman in front of me. Shall we...?" and "Well, we'll see if she gets back in touch. Now, shall we...?"
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« Reply #91 on: June 09, 2025, 07:13:48 am » |
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When MCing Allison at the beginning of Ch. 5…
Relationship Goals Later that night, you awaken... ⇝ The next morning at breakfast... Allison's at the table when you come... ⇝ "What do you think I'm doing to you?" "Like... the slave thing... you and... ⇝ "You've seemed to be really enjoying it." "Like... the slave thing... you and... ⇝ "I can tell this is scary for you. Deep breaths. Relax." "Like... the slave thing... you and... ⇝ "Just focus on how good it felt. Don't think about anything else." "Like... the slave thing... you and... ⇝ "Then don't think. Just breath and relax."
Should be “breathe”
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« Reply #92 on: June 22, 2025, 11:21:01 am » |
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In the below path you are only talking about Annie and Allison being your slave. The pronouns don't agree.
""Let's talk about Annie." "Annie?" "It's OK with you if I fuck Annie." "Um... I... not sure..." "It turns you on that she will be my slave." "But... I don't... please..." You got a bit ahead of yourself about some of them being your slaves, but..."
Starter Marriage A Phone Pings ⇝ Sneak a peak at the screen after sliding in. You slowly stroke in and out of... ⇝ This can be dealt with later. She looks back questioningly... ⇝ Keep going, but slow down and delay your orgasm. Allison always seems to be hunting... ⇝ This is perfect, just the right speed... keep going. Allison does need a lot of foreplay... ⇝ Let the orgasm happen; you know she likes it when you come in her. You give a low moan as you come... ⇝ "My weird ex. Now, we both have big days tomorrow." You have an erotic dream that night... ⇝ The next morning you get up a bit earlier than usual. Memory Lane Allison is already up and out of bed... ⇝ You find one that reminds you of that time with the guy in the bar. The two of you were hanging out in a... ⇝ OK time for breakfast. At breakfast, Allison asks, "So... ⇝ Call a friend who might know what's up. To your amazement, Lorelei actually... ⇝ See what you can find on the Internet. There isn't much. She didn't change... ⇝ Unfortunately you have to get to work. Just as you sit down at work, you... ⇝ Yeah, kinda still pissed. What's up? Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier... ⇝ The guy you left me for? Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier... ⇝ So, why get in touch now? Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier... ⇝ I need to talk with my GF first. Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier... ⇝ Then you call Allison. "Really? She wants you to go to her... ⇝ After work, you head home. You arrive back at the apartment... ⇝ Time for bed. "Another long day tomorrow," you... ⇝ The next morning you wake up alone. The Butterfly Effect The Butterfly Effect ⇝ You check your phone. Any news? ⇝ I still can't believe you're asking after what you did. Any news? ⇝ It's a bit late for make-up sex. Any news? ⇝ Isn't there someone else who could help? Any news? ⇝ I can't hurt my girlfriend. Any news? ⇝ I've told her I'm not going. Any news? ⇝ Is us being lovers again really on offer here? Any news? ⇝ If I'm going to risk it, I need an explicit commitment. Any news? ⇝ I can't turn that down. I'll come. Any news? ⇝ And then you text Lorelei. Hey. Can we get together today? I... ⇝ It's about us. Hey. Can we get together today? I... ⇝ I am going to ask Allison for an open relationship. Hey. Can we get together today? I... ⇝ Perfect. See you then. Hey. Can we get together today? I... ⇝ And then you call Allison. "Hi!" she says. She sounds very... ⇝ ... head off to work. You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "Wanted to remind them I work here. What are you up to?" You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "She's doing great! How's... I'm sorry, I've forgotten his name." You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "Oh, I'm sorry!" You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "What happened?" You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "We should grab coffee sometime. Away from work." You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "Of course! I think you two would get along great." You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ And then you get back to work. You can smell a hint of Emma's... ⇝ And then you work until it's time for your date with Lorelei. You and Lorelei have been friends... ⇝ You bring up Emma. She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "I'm stalling, though. The situation with Annie..." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "I don't know. But it's very appealing." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "It would be complicated, but worth it." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "Allison seems to be more open-minded lately." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "She is strangely accepting of me seeing Annie." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "Around you, I am not that trustworthy." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "Oh, by the way, we're having dinner with Renée and her boyfriend tonight." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ You give her a chaste kiss, take your leave, and head home. When you get home, to make your way... ⇝ You help her up, and head to dinner. You help Allison into her coat... ⇝ You knock. You really do like Dante and Renée... ⇝ "Shall we?" as you offer Allison your arm. Renée bustles off to the kitchen as... ⇝ You return to the subject of Renée's boobs. As soon as Renée joins you, you... ⇝ As the evening winds down, you say your goodbyes. As you walk to the car, your eye is... ⇝ You turn to point her out to Allison. The Girlfriend Experience You turn to Allison. "Look. Over... ⇝ You head to the car. You get to the car, and open the... ⇝ "Is everything OK? You've been a little different these days." There's a pause, and you can see her... ⇝ You finish the drive home. As you come in the door, you feel... ⇝ Head to the bathroom to check your phone. You pull out your phone. Annie's... ⇝ ... join Allison in the bedroom. She's already naked in bed when you... ⇝ "I have something I want to do to you." She has a particular weakness for... ⇝ "Let's talk about Annie." She has a particular weakness for... ⇝ "It's OK with you if I fuck Annie." She has a particular weakness for... ⇝ "It turns you on that she will be my slave
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« Reply #93 on: June 22, 2025, 12:01:46 pm » |
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« Reply #94 on: July 04, 2025, 05:25:46 am » |
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Not sure if this is the best place to bring this up, but it’s been bugging me a lot. I’m kinda obsessed with exploring all the choices and permutations in this game, and the slow text loading is super annoying. Sometimes I just want to speed-run through choices to get to different outcomes fast. It’d be awesome if you could speed up the choice loading times and text animations, or prioritize loading the choices first, it’d make replaying the game so much smoother.
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« Reply #95 on: August 01, 2025, 06:16:28 pm » |
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found a repeating line at the starting sequence:
sneak a peak -> this is perfect -> stop...
vvvvv
Of course, after enough time, she does become rather more... agreeable.
After many minutes and many soft twitches of her cunt to let you know she's coming, she sighs happily. "That's so good... is there something I can do for you?"
"That's so good... is there something I can do for you?"
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« Reply #96 on: August 01, 2025, 11:02:04 pm » |
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Wow, that's been there since SM launched! Thanks!
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« Reply #97 on: August 11, 2025, 09:05:09 am » |
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As you finish hypnotizing Emma at the coffee shop:
"As you consider your next steps, you are suddenly aware this very hypnotized woman is sitting in front of you in a crowded coffee house, and Renée could how up at any moment."
Should be "Renée could show up".
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« Reply #98 on: August 11, 2025, 11:12:52 am » |
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« Reply #99 on: Today at 06:44:21 am » |
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At least on this run if you boon enslave Renee and then suggest to Allison talking to Renee about her bad feelings of being controlled it takes you to the bad place. I tried both with and without the "is anything else going on followup" happened both ways.
Starter Marriage ⇝ Now is not the time. ⇝ Speed up, fucking her harder. ⇝ Keep going, but slow down and delay your orgasm. ⇝ This is perfect, just the right speed... keep going. ⇝ Speed up; you can feel how much she wants it. ⇝ Stop... it's time for that thing she loves. ⇝ "You will get your breasts enlarged." ⇝ "Then I suppose a blowjob is out of the question?" ⇝ "I should deal with that text." ⇝ "Nothing important. Now, we both have big days tomorrow." ⇝ The next morning you are awoken by a pleasant surprise.
⇝ You have something to check out on your phone. ⇝ You find one that reminds you of wait. You hear familiar noises from the shower. ⇝ You wander off to set out breakfast. ⇝ So, you head off to work. ⇝ Yeah, kinda still pissed. What's up? ⇝ The guy you left me for? ⇝ It's OK. What do you need? ⇝ Let me think about it. ⇝ Then you get to work; it's better to talk with Allison about this in person. ⇝ Time for other activities. The situation with Annie can wait. ⇝ ... cuddle up to Allison for the night. ⇝ The next morning you wake up alone. ⇝ You check your phone. ⇝ I still love you, but I don't know if I can. ⇝ Make it up how? ⇝ I have a girlfriend. I don't want to hurt her. ⇝ I've told her I'm not going. ⇝ Is us being lovers again really on offer here? ⇝ If I'm going to risk it, I need an explicit commitment. ⇝ Really? ⇝ I'll come. And I will hold you to that. ⇝ And then you text your "friend". ⇝ It's been a while since we've... ⇝ Yes. Just want to spend an afternoon with you. ⇝ Perfect. See you then. ⇝ And then you call Allison. ⇝ ... head off to work. ⇝ "Wanted to remind them I work here. What are you up to?" ⇝ "She's doing great! How's... I'm sorry, I've forgotten his name." ⇝ "We should grab coffee sometime. Away from work." ⇝ "No reason to complicate things." ⇝ And then you get back to work. ⇝ And then you work until it's time for your date with your "friend". ⇝ You bring up telling Allison about your affair. ⇝ "Things have changed with Allison." ⇝ "I have this feeling she's cheating on me." ⇝ "She's almost pushing me between Annie's legs." ⇝ "Very much! I'd hate to think of her with another man." ⇝ "Then my problem would be that she's not sharing." ⇝ "I would like to focus on the woman in front of me. Shall we...?" ⇝ And then you wait for her summons. ⇝ You slide onto the bed and go down on her. ⇝ You start fingering her. ⇝ You ask her to go down on you. ⇝ And then you take her. ⇝ And then you you slowly pull out. ⇝ And then you head home. ⇝ You present her with the voucher from this morning. ⇝ You get ready to leave for dinner. ⇝ You knock. ⇝ "Excuse me for a moment." You duck to the bathroom. ⇝ So, you follow Renée into the kitchen, having taken the ring. ⇝ "How did you know about that?" ⇝ "Really, I'm just hoping to fuck her." ⇝ "She's more than just accepting." ⇝ "I think that would be wise. Scientific curiosity." ⇝ "Drop." ⇝ You follow her back to the living room. ⇝ You return to the subject of Renée's boobs. ⇝ As the evening winds down, you say your goodbyes. ⇝ You decide not to mention it. ⇝ "I'm not comfortable with that." ⇝ "Yes. Do you want the details?" ⇝ "You can blow me while I give you the details." ⇝ You ask, "Then, how about a roadside blowjob?" ⇝ You finish the drive home. ⇝ Excuse yourself to the bathroom. ⇝ ... join Allison in the bedroom. ⇝ "Your mouth first, slave." ⇝ You have no choice but to let her bring you off. ⇝ "I have something I want to do to you." ⇝ "Let's about talk you being completely faithful." ⇝ "I am the only man you will have sex with." ⇝ "We're going to fuck now." ⇝ Then say, "I want to come on your tits." ⇝ ... hand her a towel. ⇝ And then you dream. ⇝ And then your dream continues. ⇝ And then your dream continues. ⇝ And then during the night... ⇝ The next morning at breakfast... ⇝ "I don't think I have the time to do you properly." ⇝ "I might see Renée for coffee this afternoon." ⇝ say, "Come here and drop, slave." ⇝ You decide to come on her face. ⇝ You hand her a napkin. ⇝ ... stand and collect your dishes from the table. ⇝ You head to work. ⇝ You text Renée back. ⇝ And then you text Annie back. ⇝ I'm looking forward to seeing you, but... ⇝ Are you still married to your ex? ⇝ What kind of trouble are you in? ⇝ I'll be happy to help, but you have to put out. ⇝ You slip the ring on. ⇝ ... hear a familiar voice behind you. ⇝ You work until work until it's time for coffee with Emma. ⇝ "I thought you might be interested, but... you know, coworkers." ⇝ "Next week? I should be back from Annie on Monday." ⇝ "You will put out on our first date." ⇝ "It sounds like she just got out of a really bad relationship." ⇝ "Well, I have a date with an incredibly hot woman coming up..." ⇝ And then you see Renée walk into the coffee house. ⇝ "I'm glad you and Lorelei stayed in touch." ⇝ "Tell me what's going on between Dante and Lorelei." ⇝ "You will blow me in the restroom here." ⇝ "What happened between Allison and Dante while we were in the kitchen last night?" ⇝ "So, how's work?" You realize you have no idea what she does. ⇝ "You will pull down your dress so I can see your tits." ⇝ "I'd love to get together once I'm back from Annie." ⇝ "So, there's something I'd like to do." ⇝ You then let her into the restroom first, and then slip in. ⇝ And then you decide to come inside her. ⇝ And then you update Allison. ⇝ Hang out until it is time to visit Lorelei. ⇝ So you come in, giving her a hug. ⇝ You remove the ring from your finger, and put it on the table. ⇝ "I have to ask, then: what is in your power to give?" ⇝ "So, about Renée." ⇝ "And now, would asking you to bed be inappropriate?" ⇝ You take your leave, and return to work. ⇝ You work until it's time to head home. ⇝ You go in. ⇝ Yousay, "Of course! What's wrong?" ⇝ "What can I do to help?"
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« Reply #100 on: Today at 07:09:23 am » |
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Thank you! I pushed a change to that flow just now. Could you let me know if it still happens to you? This is when clicking on the ""I can talk to Renée about it" action?
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« Reply #101 on: Today at 12:43:47 pm » |
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Yes it was"I can talk to Renee about it"
From the same save point which is when offered the boon, picking Renee, then any of the three ways I could find to get to "I could ask Renee about it" no longer bad place the game.
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« Reply #102 on: Today at 12:44:26 pm » |
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Yes it was"I can talk to Renee about it"
From the same save point which is when offered the boon, picking Renee, then any of the three ways I could find to get to "I could ask Renee about it" no longer bad place the game.
Yay! (That sounds like it is fixed.)
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