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« Reply #1 on: April 25, 2018, 08:27:22 am » |
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Be careful what you ask for.... I wasn't too sure about it the first time but after rereading the story a couple of times I've decided that I really like it. Thank you for that and for Unleashed, which I thought was awesome, and I really hope issue 2 of that (and this!) will not be too long coming Ms Moon (no relation to Buster, by any chance  ?). And can I add that your artistry in SJI in particular is also fantastic. |
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« Reply #2 on: April 25, 2018, 09:31:45 am » |
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Thank you  I'm glad you liked it Who is Buster Moon? lol! |
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Octavia Moon - Writer, Artist, Letterer - In Season, Unleashed, Tannhauser Twins, Friend Zone. Colorist/Letterer - Saint James Infirmary, Domina, Rapid Inductions Find me on www.patreon.com/octaviamoon |
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« Reply #3 on: April 25, 2018, 10:17:48 am » |
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An entrepreneur of the marsupial kind...  |
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« Reply #4 on: April 25, 2018, 11:39:17 am » |
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Ah...in that case...Yes, indeed, we usually just call him Grampa Moon |
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Octavia Moon - Writer, Artist, Letterer - In Season, Unleashed, Tannhauser Twins, Friend Zone. Colorist/Letterer - Saint James Infirmary, Domina, Rapid Inductions Find me on www.patreon.com/octaviamoon |
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laguna85
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« Reply #5 on: April 26, 2018, 07:10:16 am » |
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we all way want more
Love reading Unleashed
so the base new program was name after the seasons
got it
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« Reply #6 on: April 26, 2018, 04:27:44 pm » |
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I never expected to see "Gee willikers" in an erotic comic. I actually don't think I've ever read that phrase, period. It makes me think of "Leave It To Beaver" or something of that time.
That being said, I think it does work to show him losing his cool, his "manly" mask beginning to slip.
Maybe I'm misinterpreting, and it's just supposed to set the period as mid-to-late 50's, though.
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« Reply #7 on: April 27, 2018, 02:51:28 am » |
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I never expected to see "Gee willikers" in an erotic comic. I actually don't think I've ever read that phrase, period. It makes me think of "Leave It To Beaver" or something of that time.
That being said, I think it does work to show him losing his cool, his "manly" mask beginning to slip.
Maybe I'm misinterpreting, and it's just supposed to set the period as mid-to-late 50's, though.
Yes! I tried to make some of their dialogue in the vein of a comedy romp so wanted their language to be reflective of that 1950's retro futuristic era. Hopefully it wasn't off putting |
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« Reply #8 on: April 27, 2018, 12:45:26 pm » |
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Thanks for this. I really enjoyed it!
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« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2018, 03:03:00 pm » |
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Yeah, this was enjoyable. Straightforward transformation story with good, clean, expressive art. I guess my only complaint is I don't fully understand all the changes from the Summer Breeze options on the big board to what was selected under the guise of 'enhanced mods'.
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