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« Reply #15 on: January 19, 2017, 11:54:04 am »

Loved the storyline (and the art) but I'm slightly distracted because I can't work out why the second cover (at the end) is five years earlier than the first one (at the beginning). It shows the - er - remodelled girl so three  months later would make sense; I suppose it could be a typo but then the cover price is lower, consistent with an earlier edition...
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« Reply #16 on: January 19, 2017, 11:54:51 am »

Loved the storyline (and the art) but I'm slightly distracted because I can't work out why the second cover (at the end) is five years earlier than the first one (at the beginning). It shows the - er - remodelled girl so three  months later would make sense; I suppose it could be a typo but then the cover price is lower, consistent with an earlier edition...

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« Reply #17 on: January 19, 2017, 11:55:09 am »

Loved it. However, a few grammatical quibbles/errors:

Page 1: Big Boobs -> Big Boobed would read better on the magazine cover
Page 2: weight look -> weight loss
Page 5: see out -> seek out

By the by, lovely shades of pink Sturkwurk found for her lips and nails at the end there.

Have you seen the proofreading on those magazines? Smiley
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« Reply #18 on: January 19, 2017, 12:28:40 pm »

Loved the storyline (and the art) but I'm slightly distracted because I can't work out why the second cover (at the end) is five years earlier than the first one (at the beginning). It shows the - er - remodelled girl so three  months later would make sense; I suppose it could be a typo but then the cover price is lower, consistent with an earlier edition...

That picture was a bonus piece I did just for fun. 
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« Reply #19 on: January 19, 2017, 03:47:17 pm »

Have you seen the proofreading on those magazines? Smiley

Ah. Going for authenticity then, are we? I'll allow it.
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« Reply #20 on: January 19, 2017, 04:01:53 pm »

Have you seen the proofreading on those magazines? Smiley

I can honestly say I have never read a magazine with a cover which looked like that. ;p
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« Reply #21 on: January 19, 2017, 04:31:15 pm »

You know this discussion shows the desire for a sequel where the magazine helps people train their new bimbo to have a copy editor mode to help the magazine grow without impacting the budget.  Wink Grin

Fun comic, btw.
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« Reply #22 on: January 19, 2017, 05:33:41 pm »

Loved the storyline (and the art) but I'm slightly distracted because I can't work out why the second cover (at the end) is five years earlier than the first one (at the beginning). It shows the - er - remodelled girl so three  months later would make sense; I suppose it could be a typo but then the cover price is lower, consistent with an earlier edition...

That picture was a bonus piece I did just for fun. 
Ah ha; a cunningly laid red herring then. Was it you in the recent Sherlock Holmes series playing Moriarty's ghost?

Great art and detail, right up to the blonde hair highlights, for which I can forgive much!
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« Reply #23 on: January 20, 2017, 08:11:30 am »

Loved the storyline (and the art) but I'm slightly distracted because I can't work out why the second cover (at the end) is five years earlier than the first one (at the beginning). It shows the - er - remodelled girl so three  months later would make sense; I suppose it could be a typo but then the cover price is lower, consistent with an earlier edition...

That picture was a bonus piece I did just for fun. 
Ah ha; a cunningly laid red herring then. Was it you in the recent Sherlock Holmes series playing Moriarty's ghost?

Great art and detail, right up to the blonde hair highlights, for which I can forgive much!


I'm not clever enough to play Moriarty's shoelace, let alone his ghost.  I just do my best for the artwork, I'm glad you liked it.
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« Reply #24 on: January 21, 2017, 05:06:07 pm »

"Any lower back tattoo is queer / It might as well say 'Insert cock here'"
-- Stephen Lynch

TAKE THAT BACK!  Smiley I Love Tramp Stamps, and shaved pussy.  If I was President, it be the law of the land. 

I thought it was a cleaver cover.
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