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Have to say that turned out quite nicely.
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« Reply #2 on: April 14, 2016, 10:46:44 pm » |
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Have to say that turned out quite nicely.
I think you'll really like it. |
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« Reply #3 on: May 18, 2016, 12:37:42 am » |
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She's talking to the viewer. Instant 'Saved by the Bell' flashbacks. My. my, what am unexpected nostalgia trip.
Can tell if this is one-shot. I like the main's personality, and hope there's more with her coming.
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« Reply #4 on: May 18, 2016, 02:53:53 am » |
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Well that was magical~
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« Reply #5 on: May 18, 2016, 04:41:57 am » |
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more young living vibrator and young cunt sucking
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« Reply #6 on: May 18, 2016, 06:41:15 am » |
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ludemus bene in compania....
Great one-off!
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« Reply #7 on: May 18, 2016, 07:53:11 am » |
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Have to say that turned out quite nicely.
I think you'll really like it. Yup. You were right. Naaaaailed it! |
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« Reply #8 on: May 18, 2016, 08:27:13 am » |
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I really dug this one, more than I'd expect for a story with a female controller and a male subject. Is this the only story on the site that's done from the perspective of the character talking to the reader?
And is that supposed to be the stepdaughter getting enlarged on the last page?
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"And I want to reach in to the fire of your heart/I want to program all those beats right from the start"
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« Reply #9 on: May 18, 2016, 10:06:13 pm » |
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We prefer to call it enhanced. Enlarged has negative connotations.
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« Reply #10 on: May 19, 2016, 01:23:53 pm » |
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The Latin, once translated, completely cracked me up...
What is it with witches and their dead languages? And why is it always, say, Latin, and not, say, Old English?
"S¯ægêap ðêah−hwæðere flêde gengde!"
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« Reply #11 on: May 19, 2016, 01:28:53 pm » |
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The Latin, once translated, completely cracked me up...
What is it with witches and their dead languages? And why is it always, say, Latin, and not, say, Old English?
"S¯ægêap ðêah−hwæðere flêde gengde!"
(for the record, I rather prefer the look of the OE, but the Latin is easier to recognize and find translation software for.) |
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« Reply #12 on: May 20, 2016, 03:06:25 am » |
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Géap hypwærc ond ætrennes ears
Béanléag æcernspranca
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« Reply #13 on: May 20, 2016, 08:54:08 am » |
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Latin? Maaaaan! What a rip! I thought I was using an English -> Harry Potter translator!
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« Reply #14 on: May 23, 2016, 07:53:55 pm » |
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Haven't seen a female dominant in quite some time; very interesting turn of events. Personally, I think this one has some potential as a new series. Sort of go through the many adventures of building and training a new coven. Food for thought.
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