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« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2015, 04:53:55 am » |
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This has an excellent lead up. I'm interested to see where the next episode takes the story.  |
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« Reply #2 on: March 04, 2015, 05:24:26 am » |
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This has an excellent lead up. I'm interested to see where the next episode takes the story. Ah, but will there be a next part? The end could be seen as a cliff-hanger/sequel hook, but it could equally be an "And the Adventure Continues" moment, with no direct intent for there to be any kind of follow up; in fact I have a funny feeling that is EXCATLY what the ending was meant to be, but it was undermined by the fact the story just doesn’t FEEL finished... |
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« Reply #3 on: March 04, 2015, 06:02:01 am » |
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This has an excellent lead up. I'm interested to see where the next episode takes the story. Ah, but will there be a next part? The end could be seen as a cliff-hanger/sequel hook, but it could equally be an "And the Adventure Continues" moment, with no direct intent for there to be any kind of follow up; in fact I have a funny feeling that is EXCATLY what the ending was meant to be, but it was undermined by the fact the story just doesn’t FEEL finished... I really hope there is a sequel. The way on how they ended this issue practically has one begging for it. If there is to be a continuation, it should consist of further transformations in both mind and body and end with the final transformation into whatever CFM Trading wants them to become. This could include the ultimate party girl, a whore at a company-owned brothel, or (given that they are a trading company) sold on the worldwide slave market. Take your pick, make it last, make it interesting enough that people want to keep coming back, and post when ready. Please. |
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« Reply #4 on: March 04, 2015, 02:13:59 pm » |
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This one would seem to scream for a sequel since the mind control only really reveals itself near the end. That would be quite a sleight of hand one-shot.
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« Reply #5 on: March 04, 2015, 08:28:32 pm » |
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more lady buy more sex drive she become
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« Reply #6 on: March 05, 2015, 08:30:00 am » |
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The story we followed was the gal who bought one pair of shoes. First she mocked them. Then, she got confidence from them (which her friend was trying to project to her). Then, she followed her boss' suggestion days later. This seems like a gradual process. The more she wore them, the more effect they had.
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« Reply #7 on: March 05, 2015, 09:25:39 am » |
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All most like one suggestions, How about a Nano -Corset or Bra
That shape the body and turn anyone into a very horny sex crave person, this also control there minds
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« Reply #8 on: March 09, 2015, 11:08:48 am » |
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Page 8
KC Have a lose white balloon maker (pointer) on her head
In till now I was look at the body of the lady
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« Reply #9 on: March 09, 2015, 09:43:29 pm » |
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Huh. He's right. Wait! No! It's a telepathic attack! Yeah! Telepaths!
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« Reply #10 on: March 20, 2015, 07:55:17 am » |
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Is this a series, or a one-shot. I'd tend to lean toward series because the story seems to be just revving up, even if the store is closing.
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« Reply #11 on: March 20, 2015, 08:33:14 am » |
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Is this a series, or a one-shot.
Never say never, but for now, it's a one-shot. |
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« Reply #12 on: March 20, 2015, 12:29:59 pm » |
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Okay. I asked because it felt like the story was just heating up in the closing panels, and that there was more to tell.
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« Reply #13 on: March 20, 2015, 07:13:10 pm » |
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« Reply #14 on: May 02, 2015, 12:30:51 pm » |
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If you do decide to continue this story, I hope there would be a CFM hair salon specializing in Eighties hair styles. If there is such a thing as CFM hair, to my mind it would be Eighties hair--whether it's short and sleek like Lois Ayres or all fluffy and teased up like Christy Canyon, or somewhere in between like Ginger Lynn or Kristara Barrington, Eighties hair just says "SEX!" to me. Very loudly.
Another possibility would be a CFM massage service--the women get a Nuru massage from a masseuse, start to get turned on ("I've never thought of doing it with a girl before--but I'm so horny right now--") and sex happens. Or they get a Nuru from a masseur, start to get turned on ("Do you give--extras?" "No extras, ma'am--this is all part of the service") and sex happens. Granted, the Mind Control isn't all that apparent, but you could always have the women becoming CFM masseuses themselves.
Hope that helps.
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