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« on: September 28, 2024, 12:03:15 am »
Beau is having serious trouble getting a date (or even getting his date to finish her meal). But he has a new tactic in the dating game…



Script and Art: Octavia Moon
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« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2024, 12:11:35 am »
Ok, I'm intrigued.

Minor continuity error, though?  On page 3 Gray's mom wants him to get a job, but on page 7 he has a boss?  Was he job hunting off screen in the interim?
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« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2024, 10:23:47 am »
He's probably WFH, freelance & piece work.  Boomers don't think WFH is "real work," trust me.  Roll Eyes May also explain how he was able to find enough time to customize a very advanced & ethically questionable piece of software.

The banter in this one is top shelf and amusingly witty.
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« Reply #3 on: October 02, 2024, 03:42:56 pm »
Agreed on the banter; this was a fun read and established character personality quickly and effectively.

On WFH... I suppose I'd be considered a 'boomer' by today's youth (although I'm actually GenX and nothing annoys us more than being lumped in with the baby boomers) and I'm a big fan of remote work - to the point of joking about supporting the COVID virus because of how much it improved my life.  But I see your point.  It might have been clearer if she'd said something like "Get a real job."

Still, in the end a minor nitpick.
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« Reply #4 on: October 03, 2024, 12:04:12 am »
Should have made it clearer - she was his boss but isn't anymore Smiley

I'm so glad you liked it...I will get the next issue out as soon as I possibly can Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: October 03, 2024, 11:44:02 am »
I just wanna know what game it is that you can play as a hot mostly-naked woman.
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« Reply #6 on: October 03, 2024, 07:14:05 pm »
Stellar Blade?
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« Reply #7 on: October 05, 2024, 05:18:12 pm »
"I just wanna know what game it is that you can play as a hot mostly-naked woman."

The closest that ever existed as far as I know was something called 'Scarlet Blade', but it's been dead a long time now.
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