Trigger Warning #13

[Daphne]

Arrangements are being made.



Script: Daphne • Line Art: Richard Rasch • Colors and Lettering: Octavia Moon

[crazydorian]

Another fun one!

Error noticed: Page 6 panel 3.  Hannah should probably be reacting to what is being said, rather than saying it.

[Sharque]

Really hope we get another of these before the year is out. easily one of my favorite series

[Daphne]

Error noticed: Page 6 panel 3.  Hannah should probably be reacting to what is being said, rather than saying it.

Page 6 is Cherie... and I don't see an error there:

CHERIE:   Um, have you decided… um…
THOMAS:   Yes?

[lancehunter]

I think crazydorian might have meant Page 5. The word-balloon for "Would you like to move in with us?" does seem to be coming from Cherie instead of (out-of-frame) Thomas.

[macavity]

I think crazydorian might have meant Page 5. The word-balloon for "Would you like to move in with us?" does seem to be coming from Cherie instead of (out-of-frame) Thomas.

Ah, the old ‘does the cover count as page 1 or not’ conundrum. Adobe says yes, Daphne says no.

[lancehunter]

I think crazydorian might have meant Page 5. The word-balloon for "Would you like to move in with us?" does seem to be coming from Cherie instead of (out-of-frame) Thomas.

Ah, the old ‘does the cover count as page 1 or not’ conundrum. Adobe says yes, Daphne says no.

It's one of those small, but recognizable, differences between the download-and-read-offline folks and us read-on-the-site folks. Basically our "Soda" vs "Pop".

[crazydorian]

Error noticed: Page 6 panel 3.  Hannah should probably be reacting to what is being said, rather than saying it.

Page 6 is Cherie... and I don't see an error there:

CHERIE:   Um, have you decided… um…
THOMAS:   Yes?

Sorry about that, Daphne. As lancehunter guessed, I meant page 5.

[Daphne]

Fixed!