Free Wifi #5

[Daphne]

When you inspect a property, the property inspects you back…



Script: Daphne • Art: Sturkwurk

[carmel0]

Always liked 'SturkWurk's work (sat that three times fast).
He did a fun story (good twist) 'Night Visit'.
Any chance we get to meet the (new) sister?

[hollow49]

Is it meant to be textless, or did the wrong version get loaded? (I seem to recall that happening once a while back.)

[capajo]

Please upload the version with text.

[laguna85]

need new version with text same with PDF file

[crazydorian]

I assumed this one was a textless experiment.

Enjoyed it anyway.  Erin and the other girls continue the creepy vibe from the previous two issues, though it feels a bit more playful this time.  When they're appearing just behind the...inspector, I'm assuming...I picture them making a skittering noise...maybe more clicking though, due to heels.

I do enjoy the more gradual transformations normally, instead of all at once at the end, but still enjoyed.

Thanks to Daphne and SturkWurk.

[Skyrender]

I don't know if it's even a transformation at the end. Maybe the previous inspector is still there, and the new one is being introduced to her predecessor, seeing what her future looks like in the flesh.

[elenchos]

I assumed this one was a textless experiment.

As did I.
Having read the earlier issues, I didn't miss the text at all - would have been repetitive. This was good.

[lancehunter]

The Free Cable/Wifi series does have a pretty set formula, and if it's a textless experience I can see this issue being a bit like when a rock singer points the microphone at the crowd so they can sing the lyrics to the big hit song. But if it turns out that this was in error, I'll definitely read this again once it is updated, as Daphne's writing always enhances the experience.

[crazydorian]

Of course, I've mistaken a flashback for pages being out of order before too (on this very title)

[sytry]

I confess I like words in my porn.   I hope this doesn't become a thing.

[Skyrender]

I kinda wish we could get the images for every story alone, so we could make up our own stories to fit with the pics. But at the same time, I like reading Daphne's stuff, too. All my own stories would probably gravitate toward two or three types of storylines, while Daphne's imagination is obviously more fertile and diverse. That's not to say I like everything she writes, but there's always something new, or callbacks to previous episodes or projects, and the stories go longer and have more twists than I would think to introduce. It showcases the distinction between a professional writer like her, and a wannabe amateur like me. So while I'd like to have just the images to do my own thing with, or would rather just have the images for one or two episodes where some of the dialogue or the developments on one or two pages creep me out, I would also miss having the full text.

Just two coppers from this internet troll's den.

[Daphne]

OK, I was being mean. The original version without text was an error, but I was enjoying the commentary so much I left it up for a while. The version with text is now on the site. :-)

[crazydorian]

Ah, mystery solved 

At first I wondered why the laundry room was in such good condition in an apartment building where most of the residents eventually walk around in nothing but heels...but of course that also means the equipment does get used enough to be worn out.

The building and its residents are definitely getting more efficient at enslaving women.  I think this was the fastest one yet.  Amusing to see the cameos of the other ladies, looking hungry just out of eyeshot.

I still kind of wonder if the balding building manager is a different person from the young landlord back at the beginning of free cable, or if Erin and the other girls have been there 20+ years, and the same things that remolded their bodies are keeping them young-ish.

[elenchos]

I retract my earlier statement. The text is (as always) an enhancement.
It's not particularly surprising that I was able to enjoy it text-free, though. Great images.