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Author Topic: Hechizado  (Read 569 times)
Daphne
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« on: September 05, 2019, 06:46:05 pm »

Some mistakes can take a long, long time to make up for…



Script: Sadie Bella • Art: Gus • Lettering: George Zipp
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« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2019, 01:48:45 pm »

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« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2019, 02:54:56 pm »

Definitely sounds more ...assertive... in Spanish
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« Reply #3 on: September 17, 2019, 02:57:31 pm »

If I remember my high school Spanish lessons correctly, hechizado means something along the lines of bewitched, cursed, enchanted, etc. I guess we're in for a magic-themed story this week.
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Murphy said "Whatever CAN go wrong, WILL go wrong."

I say: "Murphy must've been an incurable optimist, because in my experience even things that CAN'T go wrong... somehow DO..."
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« Reply #4 on: September 18, 2019, 01:55:50 am »

That sure was a fun pastiche! The irony of man's best friend being A: actually a man, and B: now woman's best friend is delicious. Beyond that the setting, story, and art all worked well, adding up to some very *ahem* solid and lengthy content. Thank you for this!


Minor Criticism: Seeing the fun she had with Carmelita is nice and I understand the logic of inserting that page where it is, but without any sort of transition or overlap between it and the surrounding pages it took me a while to figure out I wasn't looking at an error. Also a few expressions seem off here and there, but barring those issues I quite like the art. It has a lot of character and hits far more often than it misses.
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« Reply #5 on: September 18, 2019, 01:59:56 am »

Seems like it's focused more on the voyeurism and cheating than the mind control.
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"And I want to reach in to the fire of your heart/I want to program all those beats right from the start"
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« Reply #6 on: September 18, 2019, 12:18:37 pm »

Not a fan of the femdom, but those who are will like it.  Artwork is first rate; more from this Gus, please.
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« Reply #7 on: September 18, 2019, 01:16:22 pm »

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« Reply #8 on: September 20, 2019, 12:43:46 am »

EN:
I like it.
I don't see so much a female dominant story.
I think it's a long story for a single number.
The story asks to narrate it more slowly besides focusing more on the inductions and sex scenes
I think.

ES/CAS:
A mi me gusta.
No veo tanto una historia female dominant.
Me parece una historia larga para una solo numero.
La historia pide narrarla mas despacio ademas de centrarse mas en las inducciones y escenas de sexo
Vamos me parece a mi  Wink
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