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Author Topic: Unleashed #3  (Read 2409 times)
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« on: October 24, 2018, 12:01:16 am »

The question is one of ethics, but the answer is… unclear.



Written by, Art, and Lettering: Octavia Moon
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« Reply #1 on: October 31, 2018, 12:35:29 pm »

Hello, nobody says anything?
Well maybe I  Cheesy

I love unleashed: plot, characters and of course art.

Many things have happened in this number.
I would have preferred to see the deprogramming dialogues and to the good guy gain more control over the girls, but I also love it in this way too.

I look forward to the next number to see how couples develop.

Long or short wait?   Tongue
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« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2018, 04:19:43 pm »

Already read it on Patreon, don't have much more to say.
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« Reply #3 on: October 31, 2018, 08:52:15 pm »

I'll say something--Thank You Miss Moon, for writing such good characters and drawing such lovely women.  I hope to see more of your stories on this site in the future.
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« Reply #4 on: October 31, 2018, 09:15:18 pm »

It's intriguingly different from most of the other comics on the site, in that the characters express ethical concerns over mind control and consensuality.  It feels more 'realistic' in that respect.
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« Reply #5 on: November 01, 2018, 08:16:01 am »

There are ethical concerns? Are you suggesting that people aren't my rightful playthings?

I don't know what you've been smoking, but I don't want any.
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« Reply #6 on: November 01, 2018, 10:30:00 am »

You are all very kind...this thread made my day. Unleashed has finished I'm afraid, unless I get a flash of inspiration and hammer out (on the keyboard) some more of the story. But I hope to do more stories int he future Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: November 01, 2018, 01:19:29 pm »

It's intriguingly different from most of the other comics on the site, in that the characters express ethical concerns over mind control and consensuality.  It feels more 'realistic' in that respect.

I did like this part - and I like that it didn't settle in favor of "no good person would ever use fantasy hypnosis." I think it'd be fun to see that kind of thing explored in a consensual way more often.
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« Reply #8 on: November 06, 2018, 06:47:30 pm »

I love the world that's being set up here.  I don't tend to post a lot on this forum, so if you don't know who I am, I go by T. MaskedWriter most places these days, and I've written a couple things people have told me they liked.

I'm seeing a lot of similarities between this story and my own stuff, and I'm saying that in the absolute best way.  Like, I'm seeing the sort of things that I found lacking in other MC stories that inspired me to start writing my own.  I admit freely that without Daphne's Daniel and Becka, there'd be no Troy & Julie Equals; in case "Well, if you get bored while we're gone, Google 'mcstories Daphne.' Call it your first homework assignment." wasn't enough of a clue.  Julie never had a shell to need being brought out of; however, if she had, I imagine it would have gone like Izzy and Stevie's experience in the first issue.  And the way they help Tali leave her abusive relationship is a quicker, less-porny version of "Long Day's Journey Into Susan.-

Using it to bring others into their relationship is another facet I enjoy.  Troy tries to impart ethics lessons on the other three controllers.  Stevie  and Jo's ethical discussion reminded me of Troy's "bank robbery quiz," where he asks them to plan out a perfect bank robbery using their mind control powers, then give him all the reasons why we don't do that kind of thing.

There are no evil mind controllers in my world, but that doesn't stop Troy from thinking that one could be out there.  If Troy ever ran into this Pope guy, he'd definitely take him down.  It looks like Mysty's doing that.  She doesn't rule her own fictional European country, does she?

So yes, digging this story on multiple levels and can't wait for more!
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