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« on: March 30, 2011, 09:03:21 am » |
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Three girls get quite the workout in a special room in health club...  Coming very soon! |
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Daphne
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« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2011, 12:18:46 pm » |
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And it's up!
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« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2011, 05:39:08 pm » |
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bravo! well done!
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I came,
I rendered,
I'm still broke!
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« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2011, 06:01:19 pm » |
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I like it. Wish I could download it.  Not sure what the last page means. |
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« Reply #4 on: March 30, 2011, 06:44:03 pm » |
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The ending was rather abrupt, and odd.
The art and story were very nice, however. Well done.
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« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2011, 06:48:47 am » |
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Thanks to all posters from Octavia and I for the kind words.
And the last page does mean something... (but if I explain it on a forum, it feels like I cheated!)
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« Reply #6 on: March 31, 2011, 08:48:51 am » |
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Very nice story and art work, when does "the coach" plan to open one in Chino, Ca.??
can't wait to see if there will be another chapter, but the ending does mean something, I am guessing there will be another chapter of this one.
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« Reply #7 on: March 31, 2011, 09:35:37 am » |
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If I hazard a guess, I'm thinking the Myrtle was once a young co-ed who ended up staying. I'd say she's a vision of the girls future.  |
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« Reply #8 on: March 31, 2011, 10:15:24 am » |
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Well hazarded! We have a winner!
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« Reply #9 on: March 31, 2011, 11:26:32 am » |
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Why thank you. It was a subtle nice touch at the end that I enjoyed.
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« Reply #10 on: March 31, 2011, 04:39:30 pm » |
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How were we supposed to guess that?
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« Reply #11 on: March 31, 2011, 04:40:02 pm » |
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How were we supposed to guess that?
Well, someone did! |
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« Reply #12 on: March 31, 2011, 06:04:44 pm » |
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I thought it was obvious.
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« Reply #13 on: March 31, 2011, 07:44:03 pm » |
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The obscure ending aside, this was a really good comic. Well done. I find it sexy when girls struggle but fail like the third girl in the comic did. Some good stuff coming from MCC the last couple of weeks.
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