The In-Law Unit #11

[Daphne]

Some help around the house.



Script: Daphne • Art: CV Design • Lettering: George Zipp

[wannabe]

Three thumbs up!

[meltons]

Indeed. This is a good issue!

[Vidor]

This is the sexiest comic on the website, and the reason I renewed my subscription.

I thought the blonde might come to the house in this issue, since 1) Adam hasn't fucked the blonde in her waking life yet, and 2) Renee hasn't met the blonde.  But no, instead we got a **terrific** issue in which Zoe deepens her daughter's programming, submissiveness, and slave/slut mentality.  Very, very sexy.  The bit where Zoe yanked on Renee's hair to discipline her when Renee balked at reciting her lessons....very sexy.  Very sexy indeed.

Maybe Renee will meet the blonde in the next issue!

[USNAWolf]

Loyal Opposition sounding off here.

This was one of my favorite titles until the last few pages of issue #9.  The MC specifically was aimed at shaping and intensifying the desire to serve the male focus, not demeaning the female target.  Adjusting and shaping attitude, not necessarily taking away agency.

Once the whole 'brainless bimbo' scenario appears, or entranced/unconcious, with hints of having body modification thrown in, all the heat is gone for me.
Obviously, my taste is not everyone's, at least in a fantasy, and judging solely by comments in the forum, by far the minority of those reading here.
Although, I would say a member is more likely to comment on something they found enjoyable, than one that was merely 'meh'.

The mindless bimbo scenario does seem to be appearing more frequently, though that could just be my perception of things.

Daphne can and should write whatever she likes, and if she finds it hot, then of course it will tend to appear more.

There were only three full characters in this title from the beginning, Adam, Renee, and Zoe.  Four, if you want to count Zoe's unseen and jailed Ex.
Her massage clients have so little actual interaction that they are little more than interchangeable sex objects.

Renee is now removed from being an actual character, and Adam has essentially been reduced to the role of a stunt cock.

[Daphne]

This thread could not be a better example of: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=60XTeHM9iLQ :-)

[USNAWolf]

Spot on

[Vidor]

Renee is still a character.  She's just a very different character, and it's extremely sexy, and this comic is awesome.

I was curious about the mind control juice that Zoe pours down Renee's throat.  Oh boy, I liked that panel too--but what are we to make of that mind control drink when Renee balks on reciting her mantra?  Throughout the comic Zoe has done her conditioning by subliminals after drugging her victims.  Was the drink a tranquilizer to calm Renee down?  Not a criticism, just wondering.  This comic is so hot, my only criticism is that we will probably have to wait another year for the next issue.

[Vidor]

It just occurred to me that we really should be seeing the blonde in #12, because the last time she was there, when she got the big treatment from Zoe and addressed Adam as "Master" for the first time, he said he'd see her again when she came back for her next appointment the next week--and there she is, here in issue #11.  Looking forward to the next one.

EDIT: I was curious at the bit where Zoe says "I have a new client, I think you'll like her," and then we see the blonde, who has already been enslaved to Adam and last we saw was masturbating for him over the computer.

[GodWilling]

I was curious at the bit where Zoe says "I have a new client, I think you'll like her," and then we see the blonde, who has already been enslaved to Adam and last we saw was masturbating for him over the computer.

All of Zoe's clients have been blondes apart from one, and unless the drugs are affecting their ability to remember conversations they've already had, they haven't all been the same woman, though I think we've only been given the names of two clients - Hannah, and the non-blonde Kintra.

Hannah was her first client back in #2. (Adam mentions Hannah by name in #6, but it's not clear whence he got that name.) Hannah makes her return in #8, and it's feasible to construct a timeline where this is just over a week after her previous session. Zoe offers Hannah to Adam and for the first time he accepts one of these offers. Hannah becomes Adam's slave. I believe it's later that same day in #10 that Adam is looking at a naked selfie from Hannah on his phone when Renee comes home from work. And I think it's that evening that he has the video sex call with Hannah, and she does say her next appointment with Zoe is in a week.

#11 appears to start that same evening and then continues to the following morning where this latest blonde appears. I'd say that Zoe's words - and indeed Hannah's words - make it clear that this isn't Hannah, despite appearances.


One thing I've wondered is whether that's a drugged up Zoe getting a "massage" in the porno that Adam's watching in #9, and whether the cock there is our only glimpse of the actual mind controller here.

[Vidor]

I was curious at the bit where Zoe says "I have a new client, I think you'll like her," and then we see the blonde, who has already been enslaved to Adam and last we saw was masturbating for him over the computer.

All of Zoe's clients have been blondes apart from one, and unless the drugs are affecting their ability to remember conversations they've already had, they haven't all been the same woman, though I think we've only been given the names of two clients - Hannah, and the non-blonde Kintra.  I guess I need to re-read from the beginning and get a firmer grasp on which blonde is which.

Hannah was her first client back in #2. (Adam mentions Hannah by name in #6, but it's not clear whence he got that name.) Hannah makes her return in #8, and it's feasible to construct a timeline where this is just over a week after her previous session. Zoe offers Hannah to Adam and for the first time he accepts one of these offers. Hannah becomes Adam's slave. I believe it's later that same day in #10 that Adam is looking at a naked selfie from Hannah on his phone when Renee comes home from work. And I think it's that evening that he has the video sex call with Hannah, and she does say her next appointment with Zoe is in a week.

#11 appears to start that same evening and then continues to the following morning where this latest blonde appears. I'd say that Zoe's words - and indeed Hannah's words - make it clear that this isn't Hannah, despite appearances.


One thing I've wondered is whether that's a drugged up Zoe getting a "massage" in the porno that Adam's watching in #9, and whether the cock there is our only glimpse of the actual mind controller here.

Well then I guess I'm confused b/c I thought the blonde--Hannah?--was the same character throughout, and that we'd only ever actually seen Zoe with two other customers, Hannah the blonde that has been more or less fully enslaved, and Kintra the brunette with the short haircut that, so far, has only had some beginning prep done.

I did wonder about the porno that Adam is watching in #9.  Not sure if that's just Adam watching a porno or, maybe, a home video of him and Zoe.

Boy, this is such a great comic.

EDIT: I'm gonna try and read through this whole comic, starting tomorrow, and try to solve the Mystery Of The Blondes.

[Vidor]

A Survey Of Blonde Characters In "The In-Law Unit"

Issue 2: First appearance of Hannah the blonde.  Specifically named.  Long-ish, straight hair.

Issue 4 (last panel) and Issue 5: An unnamed blonde.  I guess this is a different character from Hannah, although honestly I can't tell, other than Zoe telling the blonde in this issue "I'm renting from my daughter and her boyfriend" which she already told Hannah in #2.

Issue 8: Hannah, again named.  This is basically where Zoe enslaves her.

Issue 9: Hannah, named, and following up from Issue 8 anyway.

Issue 10: Pretty sure this is Hannah, not named, but she's calling him Master.

Issue 11: A new blonde--I guess.  I literally can't tell the difference between this character and either Hannah or the blonde from Issues 4 and 5, other than, as noted above, Zoe calling her a new client and this one seemingly not mind-controlled.  I think.  Maybe this is the Issue 4/5 blonde?  Or maybe Hannah is actually triplets?

[Vidor]

This is the sexiest comic on the website, and the reason I renewed my subscription.

I thought the blonde might come to the house in this issue, since 1) Adam hasn't fucked the blonde in her waking life yet, and 2) Renee hasn't met the blonde.  But no, instead we got a **terrific** issue in which Zoe deepens her daughter's programming, submissiveness, and slave/slut mentality.  Very, very sexy.  The bit where Zoe yanked on Renee's hair to discipline her when Renee balked at reciting her lessons....very sexy.  Very sexy indeed.

Maybe Renee will meet the blonde in the next issue!

We grow closer to the 1-year anniversary and presumably the next comic in this series.  I hope that the next issue does in fact have Hannah come over so Adam can fuck her while she's awake, and so Renee can meet her and realize that her master has a third slave.

Incidentally one thing I observed in my latest read-through is that while Zoe calls Adam "Master" as a matter of course, Renee only does it during sexy time, even after Zoe started the full slave-wife programming in issues 10-11.  I wonder if Renee will get more used to, or conditioned to, calling her husband "Master" as a regular routine,