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Author Topic: Saint James Infirmary 73: Feet, Do Your Duty.  (Read 20683 times)
laguna85
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« Reply #15 on: February 26, 2012, 09:32:47 am »

Quote from: mns_95125 on February 25, 2012, 10:37:31 pm

There's also a typographical error -- a word left out of Adrian's dialog.  He says "We'll use it unprogram" when I think he meant "We'll use it *to* unprogram".


Well spotted! Let's say he was out of breath and distracted from running in the middle of all that bouncing. Do you think people will buy that?

Well
 I know that I do some typographical error.
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« Reply #16 on: February 26, 2012, 04:44:18 pm »

When Erin and Mallory finished her programming, they removed the clothing ban.

Yep, got it in one! I wouldn't rule out Jacqui's entertainment value in the immediate future, though...

I'd think it's not really whether we noticed that but rather whether Adrian notices. That's why I winked when I first mentioned the clothing. It seemed obvious that her "programming" was advanced. (I hesitate to call it completed at this time.)

I was wondering why the girls waiting at home didn't great him with "Hi Master."

Oh, they have their reasons...
Which seem pretty obvious too as part of the additional programming. Maybe they think they can distract him enough so he doesn't notice the change in programming giving them a chance at the other girls. Again, it seems aimed at Adrian and the fact that the watch (or something) wants the harem to keep existing. Noticing it in the thread might ruin the next few frames for some or it might show how dumb I am when they're shown.

I think one of the issues of a once a week comic is having a LOT of time to try and predict where the plot might go in the future. (Though not necessarily the next frame. You've already proved you can redirect the focus of the plot when needed for several frames.)
Of course, I have lots of experience with waiting on plot lines. I've been reading the Wheel of Time since 1993. It will be another year before we finally find out which plot lines will be resolved and how in Book 14! I figure that this story is just getting to a point when it starts up about 3-4 other plot lines which won't get resolved for several years at the earliest. After all, Raven and Sue need to get more involved! We'll see if I'm right. (If I live long enough!)
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« Reply #17 on: February 26, 2012, 08:16:54 pm »

But...but...that's my wish.

I was wondering why the girls waiting at home didn't great him with "Hi Master."

Oh, they have their reasons...

I'm sure they do. The possibilities for the greating are many ;-)
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« Reply #18 on: February 29, 2012, 08:49:06 am »

Again, it seems aimed at Adrian and the fact that the watch (or something) wants the harem to keep existing.

I like that sentence a great deal. It's mysterious.

Noticing it in the thread might ruin the next few frames for some or it might show how dumb I am when they're shown.

Not dumb at all...guessing where it's going to go is supposed to be part of the fun! And don't worry about ruining anything; if anyone ever gets the prediction exactly right, their post will be deleted and shortly there will be a knock at the door...

I figure that this story is just getting to a point when it starts up about 3-4 other plot lines which won't get resolved for several years at the earliest. After all, Raven and Sue need to get more involved! We'll see if I'm right. (If I live long enough!)

Hang in there! It'll be worth it.
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« Reply #19 on: March 02, 2012, 10:03:01 am »

well have to see what Adrian do with 8 love well look sextly women or sex slave.

I think the ladys want have sex fun frist and wake up from hypnosis second or never. that would be fun

I would like one of the ladys
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