Actually, pretty much everyone looks great in this one.  Nice job on the art.  
The one glaring exception is the cat, of course, who looks terminally derpy.  I can only assume she's meant to be drawn that way; I guess Laura holds the dubious honor of owning the ugliest cat in the state.
I love the lighting effect on the frame with Marliese and Mallory.  
Bless you for that...We will confess to being particularly inexperienced in drawing and painting animals. Boobs being our forte - pussies not so much 

 I for one am pleased the art turned out well...this page took us three times longer than most pages and there was much cursing and painkillers during the process 
