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« on: October 10, 2010, 02:22:28 pm » |
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Jana goes to rent a new apartment, not knowing what the man in apartment 4F has planned for her.  Coming November 3rd! |
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« Reply #1 on: October 28, 2010, 07:12:44 am » |
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The description is a little vague on this one Daphne, But as always, you have a knack to "bring it all together", will see what you have in store on Wednesday 11/3/10, after the election of course, what timing!!!
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« Reply #2 on: November 03, 2010, 12:39:01 am » |
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Just getting the title page so far. Is it still being uploaded?
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« Reply #3 on: November 03, 2010, 05:10:59 am » |
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Same issue, but the download works.
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« Reply #4 on: November 03, 2010, 07:43:35 am » |
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Up now!
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« Reply #5 on: November 03, 2010, 11:16:33 am » |
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Daphne, You did it again, I really liked the way the landlord TOOK control of Jana and the rest of his tenents.
I hope we will see more of what happens to girls who rent from the man in apartment 4F!!!
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« Reply #6 on: November 03, 2010, 06:24:19 pm » |
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I really liked the story. I hope it goes on for a bit, maybe we get a few more vague details about how the landlord got this power. My only problem, and it feels petty but it's important for a comic, is the art. The style was distracting. I kept almost getting into the story but then the art would push me out again.
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« Reply #7 on: November 03, 2010, 08:28:45 pm » |
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I have to agree with the previous post by Snuggles. With all due apologies to Blackstorm95 and CMC, who both probably have more talent in their pinkies than I have in my entire body, the artwork in this specific instance, really sucks canal water. Story is fine, but the art is so awful that it makes it difficult to follow the story. Sorry.  |
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« Reply #9 on: November 04, 2010, 07:57:28 am » |
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Daphne, I will REPEAT myself when I said that ALL artists are NOT created the same, nor is their artwork.
All artists who have the ability to draw do so differently than other's who draw especially comics, each one develops his or her own character's and draws them as HE/SHE see's them.
I for one really like the different styles of drawing that are being done by a group of VERY TALENTED artist, Thank GOD, you have such a group to tell your stories in comic form, KEEP THEM COMING!!!!
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« Reply #10 on: November 04, 2010, 05:45:16 pm » |
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I have to agree with the previous post by Snuggles. With all due apologies to Blackstorm95 and CMC, who both probably have more talent in their pinkies than I have in my entire body, the artwork in this specific instance, really sucks canal water. Story is fine, but the art is so awful that it makes it difficult to follow the story. Sorry. And I agree with Pudding and Snuggles. Sorry. |
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« Reply #11 on: November 12, 2010, 10:19:55 pm » |
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Hit it out of the park, again. Liked the artwork very much.
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