The Hidden Knowledge #2

[mns_95125]

A moral person wouldn't use MC, PERIOD.

A moral person wouldn't use MC knowingly.  What about a story in which a moral person uses MC unknowingly for a time and only figures out what's going on once he's in too deep to stop easily?  (An example of such a story from the EMCSA would be Downing Street's "Talked Themselves Into It".)  Now, that said, Daffyd is obviously not in that kind of situation beyond the very first time.  The key transition took place when he decided to go out and pick up a random woman off the street at the end of the first part.  The realization that he's crossed a line in character development is subdued because we don't get any visibility into what he's thinking, only what he does.

[Vidor]

As someone on the other forum once said, "Conscience is the cancer of MC stories," which is to say, moral dilemmas on the part of the controller are a turn off. I can think of only one story where the main character having second thoughts about taking advantage was done effectively (that would be Good to the Last Drop) and even in that case, he only thinks about it, and continues to fuck everything that moves. A moral person wouldn't use MC, PERIOD. This sliding scale of still an alright guy but an MC'er is what gets us all those romantic MC stories where you control the person who already loves you to love you even more.  Ridiculous. Unrepentant till the end for me, thank you very much.

Exactly!  Please, no "oh, I'm a terrible person, what have I done, boo hoo" scenes.

Of course, we don't know where Daphne's going to take this story, but if the cover art for the first two installments is any clue, and if Daphne's body of work as represented by all her short stories, MC movies and other comics is is a clue, "The Hidden Knowledge" is not going to end with Daffyd as a whiny little wimp boo-hooing about all the hot, sexy, pliant slaves that he has.  Instead it will probably end with him as a cheerfully unrepentant Master of a lovely harem.


I hope.

Anyway, I look forward to him MC'ing the other girls in the story.  Particularly the coworker--seriously, LOVED that sequence--and the blonde that walked by in the first scene of Part 2.

[jmundt29]

Again, I'm not looking for catharsis or Manasseh repentance.  You can have him progress in small stages.  Say it for a joke.  Fantasize about it.  Try it out on random strangers with increasing boldness.  Maybe use it to turn the tables on his ex--patch things up with her by making her a pliant thrall or even get revenge on her using some of the phrases in the book--and THEN progress to a seducer's paradise where he becomes a cheerful master with a large harem.  It just seems that Issue #2 (while very entertaing and exceptionally well-made) skipped a couple of those steps. 

[Chettbaker]

I love this story and the artwork as well.  I'm just curious to see if the main character is going to use any other spells in his book,  using his imagination, I'm sure he could bring about some other wild, wonderful, sexy, silly, fun, humiliating changes to the women he meets.  Going back to the views polls, possible BE? even?(not my thing but the wtf factor on a womans face is always fun). 

[vortingan]

This is really great so far!  I liked seeing the progression from Daffyd simply experimenting with his new abilities to using them with a purpose.  It really does seem like he's using the powers in an intriguingly insidious way, rather than instantly enslaving every new girl that wanders his way.  He's clearly toying with some of them, which is awesome to see!  Instant hypno-"zaps" can be pretty rewarding depending on the subject, but sometimes it's more fun to draw it out and get them a bit at a time.

One thing I really hope to see is how Daffyd might use some of his current slaves, particularly Kayleigh, against the women who haven't 'seen the light' yet.  Can he train this harem girls to speak the words too or does he need to speak them directly to someone?  I can't wait to see the next issue!

[PortalComic]

Hi everyone!
We just want to throw a few lines to thank you all the very kind words towards our work.
We are glad you like it so much.

[master]

Could be because you've earned the praise. Keep up the great work...just do it faster! We want more hand drawn comics and we want them now! Faster, galley(proof) slaves, faster!

[robbie73_]

Hey, Master, The guys and gals ay Portal Comics do a FANTASTIC job, and their comics PROVE it!!

How about cutting them some slack, I know how much we all enjoy this story, but as the publisher says"Quality takes time" and I personally will wait for a top quality product, it's not quanity, it's QUALITY!!!

[robbie73_]

To our great publisher Daphne, Any idea on what twist this GREAT story will take, WHO will be Daffyd's next group of victims(SLAVES)

[master]

honestly robbie...that was a joke.

[Detrix]

A moral person wouldn't use MC, PERIOD.

Exactly!  Please, no "oh, I'm a terrible person, what have I done, boo hoo" scenes.

I know these posts are a little old but I'd like to put in my two cents. It's not right to control someone, degrade them, beat them, humiliate them, etc... unless of course they ask for it. You seem to forget there are plenty of people into bondage, S&M, and a whole bunch of other kinky things. There have even been a few MCStories that have a good guy in control. The one I can think of off the top of my head would be the one where a guy's wife is an executive or something but is naturally submissive so every day she has to act strong and in charge and it was getting to her. So they decide to try hypnosis so when she's in lingerie she's her husband's slave. She gets to give up her control and he gets a sex slave, both know and are happy with the deal.

Sure the "hero" of this story isn't really what I'd consider a good guy but I still think there can be MC by good guys. Maybe if I ever finish one of my stories and post it we'd have another good example, the main guy is a good guy and has a harem of about 4 girls at this point. All of which asked for it because he wouldn't have done it otherwise.

[Vidor]

It's not right to control someone, degrade them, beat them, humiliate them, etc

I don't know why people feel compelled to go to forums about mind control and deliver lectures on morality.

[sturtles]

It's not right to control someone, degrade them, beat them, humiliate them, etc

I don't know why people feel compelled to go to forums about mind control and deliver lectures on morality.

I can't agree with you more..

This is a comic porn site, actually

[Detrix]

I find it amusing that you cut off the last part of that sentience which implied morality is extremely subjective.

[Vidor]

I find it amusing that you cut off the last part of that sentience which implied morality is extremely subjective.

I clipped the only part that I care about, because I don't care about your morality, whether its subjective or not.  I certainly don't want to hear about it on a comic porn site.

Write your story about the "good guy" mind controller.  Maybe I'll read it.  But please don't blather on about right and wrong, because you are in exactly the wrong place for blathering on about right and wrong.