Connected #7

[Daphne]

Everything is filling out nicely.



Script: Daphne • Art: Maxxx.Art • Lettering: George Zipp

[laguna85]

been mindless sex doll from old wife

[Underworld]

Lovely art and great to see the continuation but no dialogue seems like an odd choice given the other issues have been really good for it both in driving the plot and adding to the mind control feel.

[BorisL]

Was it meant to be a silent movie?

[arm7man88]

I feel like since it specifically says Lettering done by G. Zipp that there should be text, could be wrong though!

[Daphne]

It worked surprisingly well with no lettering, but, yes, there should be lettering. Fixed!

[laguna85]

page 12 made hard with out lettering

[ktc1221]

Not the only time a comics images go up without lettering. I did see this one with and without and the story told through images alone got most of the point through but the text does add needed context. I have obsessively tried to see any notable visual cue between her figure in this chapter compared to earlier and if she is curvier now it's gotta be by centimeters and very, very subtle. Kudos to the art for managing to make it obvious but not obvious. Like I know Holly's boobs are bigger, hips are wider, ass is bigger, but I couldn't really verify by how much when comparing to older issues simply because there is no true 1 to 1 shot. Yet both the text and images support that she must be and my eyes are not playing tricks on me. Admittedly, her boobs seem notably larger than in the first few panels with her but given how huge the secretary was at the start it seems likely at least one of this guys harem will end up similarly sized. The boob lover in me can't help but dream it so.