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« on: April 10, 2021, 12:02:00 am »
Sometimes, you don't want to know the whole story…



Script: William Pratt • Line Art: Don Lomax • Colors: Maksim Strelkov • Lettering: Hellica
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spiderman27
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« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2021, 06:30:17 am »
Looks interesting
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« Reply #2 on: April 12, 2021, 10:11:56 pm »
Oh nice! I got to beta read the script for this one for Mr Pratt, so I'm interested to see how it turned out  Smiley
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« Reply #3 on: April 14, 2021, 10:06:45 am »
Eh, mediocre art, ends with a woman being degraded into a sex worker. The story presents being a sex worker as degrading, that's not my commentary.

Not really hot.
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« Reply #4 on: April 14, 2021, 12:35:19 pm »
Didn't read to me as "sex work is degrading" as much as "her views on men are degrading so now she's going to degrade herself for men."
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« Reply #5 on: April 14, 2021, 06:59:11 pm »
Can anyone tell what it says under Gretchen on page 12?  It looks like "Show the bitch that fetch is happening," and I don't know what that would mean. 
I liked the story and wouldn't mind seeing more of it.
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« Reply #6 on: April 14, 2021, 07:07:11 pm »
Quote from: budrothepious on April 14, 2021, 06:59:11 pm
Can anyone tell what it says under Gretchen on page 12?  It looks like "Show the bitch that fetch is happening," and I don't know what that would mean. 
I liked the story and wouldn't mind seeing more of it.

That's how I read it; I'm assuming it's a tease to a potential second issue. Possibly referring to puppy play?

I see Haight's point and I think I agree, but it wasn't a dealbreaker for me.

As an MD guy I'd be more interested in Mike's story if this series continues.
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« Reply #7 on: April 14, 2021, 07:58:22 pm »
Quote from: budrothepious on April 14, 2021, 06:59:11 pm
Can anyone tell what it says under Gretchen on page 12?  It looks like "Show the bitch that fetch is happening," and I don't know what that would mean. 
I liked the story and wouldn't mind seeing more of it.
It's a pop culture reference from the movie Mean Girls.

http://gph.is/2eggPHn
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« Reply #8 on: April 15, 2021, 08:40:52 am »
Quote from: HarryManBack on April 14, 2021, 12:35:19 pm
Didn't read to me as "sex work is degrading" as much as "her views on men are degrading so now she's going to degrade herself for men."

Agreed.

I liked the story, but it felt like there was a page or two missing between 11 and 12. Nothing was ever done with "I obey"; what was that for?  And I don't really know if Tasha ever knew she'd been manipulated. On page 12, I think she was doing pretty much what she always does. And as a side note: of course there's a prison for whores.
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« Reply #9 on: April 15, 2021, 11:03:40 pm »
I liked it! Art and coloring felt pulpy, and the effect worked for me.
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« Reply #10 on: April 18, 2021, 06:38:21 pm »
I liked this one.
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