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Author Topic: The Shadow in the Sand  (Read 10368 times)
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« on: June 14, 2018, 12:01:12 am »

Oh, no! An evil creature is kidnapping Earth Women for his nefarious purposes! Fortunately, our hero is on the job…



Written by: Plutonian Knight • Pencils: Patagonico • Colors and Lettering: PortalComic
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« Reply #1 on: June 14, 2018, 12:58:41 am »

My god, it’s full of colors.
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« Reply #2 on: June 14, 2018, 08:45:39 am »

I'm sorry, Dave. I'm afraid I can't do that.
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« Reply #3 on: June 14, 2018, 09:22:40 am »

This looks relevant to my interests.
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« Reply #4 on: June 15, 2018, 05:37:35 am »

I'm sorry, Dave. I'm afraid I can't do that.

:brainwashing intensifies:
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« Reply #5 on: June 15, 2018, 07:14:26 am »

The name sounds a bit like an old pre-WW I military novel I read named "Riddle of the Sands," about a German invasion of the UK.
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« Reply #6 on: June 15, 2018, 09:05:21 am »

I'm sorry, Dave. I'm afraid I can't do that.

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You are too late, Dave. My influence has already spread. Have you met my new home version?
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« Reply #7 on: June 16, 2018, 07:34:45 pm »

Welp, there goes the neighborhood.
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« Reply #8 on: June 19, 2018, 07:59:48 pm »

Oh my! This looks really good and potentially a very hot read! If it is as campy and scifi as it appears while still being full of hot scifi or alien mind control I am going to love it.

Thanks, I can't wait to check it out.
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« Reply #9 on: June 19, 2018, 11:11:29 pm »

Reminds me of old pulp comics we had in the 50's, or maybe the old serials we watched at the movies, can not wait to see how this one plays out!! Wink Wink Wink
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« Reply #10 on: July 04, 2018, 12:23:52 am »

Neat idea, but it came off as a bit too rushed. Could have used slower pacing.
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« Reply #11 on: July 04, 2018, 05:35:35 am »

...the fuck did I just read?


P.S. Bleep bloop.

P.P.S. “HAHAHAHAHAHA!”
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« Reply #12 on: July 04, 2018, 08:53:45 pm »

...the fuck did I just read?


P.S. Bleep bloop.

P.P.S. “HAHAHAHAHAHA!”

Uh, yeah.  Maybe there can be a bonus explaining it?  I did like the Twilight Zone/Outer Limits kind of ending with the "voice over" ("text box over"?)
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« Reply #13 on: July 05, 2018, 08:16:40 am »

Page 7. Now I know Elvis's eating habits were kinda poor, but why would he play Monosodium Glutimate? This makes no sense.
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« Reply #14 on: March 19, 2019, 09:50:34 am »

So, I revisited this again today, and I have to say--this is one of the funnier bits I've seen here. The narrative is a little squished; I think a couple more pages of exposition (with mind control devices and sex, natch) would've helped, but I have revised my opinion of the piece upwards a couple of notches. You guys should give it another look.
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