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« on: August 25, 2025, 10:13:27 pm »
A little guided imagery goes a long way…



Script: Daphne • Art: Sturkwurk
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« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2025, 09:57:45 am »
Hooray can't wait!
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« Reply #2 on: August 26, 2025, 10:03:11 am »
This is very exciting
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« Reply #3 on: August 29, 2025, 03:59:43 am »
page 9 need be page 8 and page 8 need be 9, page 9 now he asking question and Are you by yourself Now ? Now page 8 mother is answer the question and pdf need to change to 
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« Reply #4 on: August 29, 2025, 08:18:26 am »
Yeah, I was coming here to say that page 9 and 10 are weird, 9 being the answer to the questions and 10 being the questions. Given the format, it seems a moot point to have the questions and answers on separate pages. Also, on page 11, pretty sure the line should be "There is someone I need to introduce you to" ...unless it turns out that the A.I. was the true protagonist all along and simply using Jason to grow its knowledge.

I like how the A.I seems kind of snarky in this installment, like dude really? ....Ok, one horny 'fantasy' coming up...

A little late here but perhaps something to consider, color coding dialogue. Since there is limited space in a picture, it might be helpful when two characters are interacting to have one be a different color. I'm certainly enjoying the story and look forward to seeing more,
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« Reply #5 on: August 29, 2025, 08:34:23 am »
Quote from: laguna85 on August 29, 2025, 03:59:43 am
page 9 need be page 8 and page 8 need be 9, page 9 now he asking question and Are you by yourself Now ? Now page 8 mother is answer the question and pdf need to change to 

It is exactly as intended. Sorry it didn't work for you.
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« Reply #6 on: August 29, 2025, 09:26:53 am »
Loved this issue!  For the longest time i thought Anya was Liz until this issue.  Still tho can't wait for the next one!
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« Reply #7 on: August 29, 2025, 10:03:53 am »
Quote from: Daphne on August 29, 2025, 08:34:23 am
Quote from: laguna85 on August 29, 2025, 03:59:43 am
page 9 need be page 8 and page 8 need be 9, page 9 now he asking question and Are you by yourself Now ? Now page 8 mother is answer the question and pdf need to change to 

It is exactly as intended. Sorry it didn't work for you.
ok thank
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