Starter Marriage 4.1.10 released. Typos, small bugs, etc.
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on: June 22, 2025, 12:07:24 pm
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Started by Daphne - Last post by Daphne | ||
Starter Marriage 4.1.10 released. Typos, small bugs, etc.
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The Letters Page -- WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS / Starter Marriage / Re: Report inconsistencies, bugs, typos etc. here.
on: June 22, 2025, 12:01:46 pm
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Started by jwik01 - Last post by Daphne | ||
Thanks!
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The Letters Page -- WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS / Starter Marriage / Re: Report inconsistencies, bugs, typos etc. here.
on: June 22, 2025, 11:21:01 am
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Started by jwik01 - Last post by Bob42 | ||
In the below path you are only talking about Annie and Allison being your slave. The pronouns don't agree.
""Let's talk about Annie." "Annie?" "It's OK with you if I fuck Annie." "Um... I... not sure..." "It turns you on that she will be my slave." "But... I don't... please..." You got a bit ahead of yourself about some of them being your slaves, but..." Starter Marriage A Phone Pings ⇝ Sneak a peak at the screen after sliding in. You slowly stroke in and out of... ⇝ This can be dealt with later. She looks back questioningly... ⇝ Keep going, but slow down and delay your orgasm. Allison always seems to be hunting... ⇝ This is perfect, just the right speed... keep going. Allison does need a lot of foreplay... ⇝ Let the orgasm happen; you know she likes it when you come in her. You give a low moan as you come... ⇝ "My weird ex. Now, we both have big days tomorrow." You have an erotic dream that night... ⇝ The next morning you get up a bit earlier than usual. Memory Lane Allison is already up and out of bed... ⇝ You find one that reminds you of that time with the guy in the bar. The two of you were hanging out in a... ⇝ OK time for breakfast. At breakfast, Allison asks, "So... ⇝ Call a friend who might know what's up. To your amazement, Lorelei actually... ⇝ See what you can find on the Internet. There isn't much. She didn't change... ⇝ Unfortunately you have to get to work. Just as you sit down at work, you... ⇝ Yeah, kinda still pissed. What's up? Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier... ⇝ The guy you left me for? Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier... ⇝ So, why get in touch now? Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier... ⇝ I need to talk with my GF first. Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier... ⇝ Then you call Allison. "Really? She wants you to go to her... ⇝ After work, you head home. You arrive back at the apartment... ⇝ Time for bed. "Another long day tomorrow," you... ⇝ The next morning you wake up alone. The Butterfly Effect The Butterfly Effect ⇝ You check your phone. Any news? ⇝ I still can't believe you're asking after what you did. Any news? ⇝ It's a bit late for make-up sex. Any news? ⇝ Isn't there someone else who could help? Any news? ⇝ I can't hurt my girlfriend. Any news? ⇝ I've told her I'm not going. Any news? ⇝ Is us being lovers again really on offer here? Any news? ⇝ If I'm going to risk it, I need an explicit commitment. Any news? ⇝ I can't turn that down. I'll come. Any news? ⇝ And then you text Lorelei. Hey. Can we get together today? I... ⇝ It's about us. Hey. Can we get together today? I... ⇝ I am going to ask Allison for an open relationship. Hey. Can we get together today? I... ⇝ Perfect. See you then. Hey. Can we get together today? I... ⇝ And then you call Allison. "Hi!" she says. She sounds very... ⇝ ... head off to work. You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "Wanted to remind them I work here. What are you up to?" You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "She's doing great! How's... I'm sorry, I've forgotten his name." You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "Oh, I'm sorry!" You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "What happened?" You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "We should grab coffee sometime. Away from work." You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ "Of course! I think you two would get along great." You sit down in your cube. The... ⇝ And then you get back to work. You can smell a hint of Emma's... ⇝ And then you work until it's time for your date with Lorelei. You and Lorelei have been friends... ⇝ You bring up Emma. She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "I'm stalling, though. The situation with Annie..." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "I don't know. But it's very appealing." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "It would be complicated, but worth it." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "Allison seems to be more open-minded lately." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "She is strangely accepting of me seeing Annie." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "Around you, I am not that trustworthy." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ "Oh, by the way, we're having dinner with Renée and her boyfriend tonight." She listens to your retelling of... ⇝ You give her a chaste kiss, take your leave, and head home. When you get home, to make your way... ⇝ You help her up, and head to dinner. You help Allison into her coat... ⇝ You knock. You really do like Dante and Renée... ⇝ "Shall we?" as you offer Allison your arm. Renée bustles off to the kitchen as... ⇝ You return to the subject of Renée's boobs. As soon as Renée joins you, you... ⇝ As the evening winds down, you say your goodbyes. As you walk to the car, your eye is... ⇝ You turn to point her out to Allison. The Girlfriend Experience You turn to Allison. "Look. Over... ⇝ You head to the car. You get to the car, and open the... ⇝ "Is everything OK? You've been a little different these days." There's a pause, and you can see her... ⇝ You finish the drive home. As you come in the door, you feel... ⇝ Head to the bathroom to check your phone. You pull out your phone. Annie's... ⇝ ... join Allison in the bedroom. She's already naked in bed when you... ⇝ "I have something I want to do to you." She has a particular weakness for... ⇝ "Let's talk about Annie." She has a particular weakness for... ⇝ "It's OK with you if I fuck Annie." She has a particular weakness for... ⇝ "It turns you on that she will be my slave |
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on: June 21, 2025, 12:03:31 am
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Started by Daphne - Last post by Daphne | ||
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on: June 20, 2025, 10:25:20 pm
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Started by hereno - Last post by Toby Dammit | ||
some more anal-fixation pondering
![]() "sneak a peek after sliding in" gives you an interesting result when you take it to its furthest conclusion "you can't hold back anymore". even tho atp you've given up the big MCer timeline, the sex ends on you thinking back to when Annie became addicted to taking it in the back at the end of your time with her. you go to bed and dream of simply sleeping with annie, so maybe that's another hint... I'm extremely curious if there's an alternative pathway, now, to getting the second MC after the party and coming up "let's talk about anal". anyways, back to the mines, for i will keep exploring. |
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The Letters Page -- WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS / Saint James Infirmary / Re: Saint James Infirmary #1489: “Second Thoughts”
on: June 20, 2025, 10:15:04 am
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Started by Daphne - Last post by Sharque | ||
Given what happened to Danielle last issue when she had the cum "shot into her," I think it's safe to assume we might be looking at the theatre trap 2.0 for poor Erin.
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on: June 20, 2025, 04:28:27 am
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Started by hereno - Last post by BenHur Over | ||
Can the management provide any information on the conundrum of how to get Emma irritated enough to report you to HR, then? OK, by way of apology: (a) When you first talk with Emma, and she adds "Over coffee" to her exiting comment, you will likely get blue-dress Emma the next day when she asks you to coffee. Blue-dress Emma is less likely to report you to HR, although it is still possible. (b) BSD-daemon-shirt Emma is more likely to report you to HR over you asking her out when she just told you to knock it off. (In story-world terms, depending on your prior choices, Emma will either be friendly but not interested in you romantically, or will be sufficiently interested in you that she is willing to entertain dating you even though you have a girlfriend. It's not required to MC her to get her to go out with you in the latter case, although MC works too.) Anyone with any rough idea how to get blue dress Emma to report you to HR? |
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on: June 20, 2025, 04:19:03 am
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Started by hereno - Last post by JonJacub | ||
Can the management provide any information on the conundrum of how to get Emma irritated enough to report you to HR, then? OK, by way of apology: (a) When you first talk with Emma, and she adds "Over coffee" to her exiting comment, you will likely get blue-dress Emma the next day when she asks you to coffee. Blue-dress Emma is less likely to report you to HR, although it is still possible. (b) BSD-daemon-shirt Emma is more likely to report you to HR over you asking her out when she just told you to knock it off. (In story-world terms, depending on your prior choices, Emma will either be friendly but not interested in you romantically, or will be sufficiently interested in you that she is willing to entertain dating you even though you have a girlfriend. It's not required to MC her to get her to go out with you in the latter case, although MC works too.) Anyone with any rough idea how to get blue dress Emma to report you to HR? |
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on: June 19, 2025, 01:39:50 pm
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Started by hereno - Last post by JonJacub | ||
Sorry just noticed I fell victim to the emoji problem but didn't see it. Updated the path above.
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on: June 19, 2025, 12:48:56 pm
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Started by Daphne - Last post by Toby Dammit | ||
thanks for the response! that's impressive work, especially since so much of the job requires fitting the script in between several spots at once and make it flow-- and you certainly aren't half-ass-ing it!
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