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Here's something new to me, at least. This path also has a weird bit where you are trying to make Allison agree to be your sex-slave, she's resistant, and rather than have the narration say "she's not going to accept this, move on," instead you simply...do move on.

"girlfriend not whore now" is the caption for the card and it appears to depict a new, previously-unseen woman with dirty blonde hair cut just above her shoulders, and more-or-less-realistically-sized breasts. Natalia from the reminiscence?

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Starter Marriage
   
A Phone Pings
   ⇝ Something tells you that you should stop and look.
"I should check, I'm sorry," you...
   ⇝ This can be dealt with later.
She looks back questioningly...
   ⇝ Keep going, but slow down and delay your orgasm.
Allison always seems to be hunting...
   ⇝ This is perfect, just the right speed... keep going.
Allison does need a lot of foreplay...
   ⇝ Speed up; you can feel how much she wants it.
And Allison is kinky in her own...
   ⇝ Stop... it's time for that thing she loves.
Her "special thing" involves her...
   ⇝ "You will let me come in your mouth."
She gives a little private smile...
   ⇝ "I should deal with that text."
You send back a text: need help...
   ⇝ "My weird ex. Now, we both have big days tomorrow."
"Thank you for a lovely evening...
   ⇝ The next morning you are awoken by a pleasant surprise.
Memory Lane
   
Memory Lane
   ⇝ You have something to check out on your phone.
You get the phone off of the...
   ⇝ You find one that reminds you of that time with Natalia.
The two of you were hanging out in a...
   ⇝ OK time for breakfast.
At breakfast, Allison asks, "So...
   ⇝ So, you head off to work.
Just as you sit down at work, you...
   ⇝ I could never say no to you.  What's going on?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ How could anyone walk out on you?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ I miss you too. What can I do for you?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ I'd like that. Let me check with work.
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ Then you call Allison.
"Really? She wants you to go to her...
   ⇝ After work, you text Annie that you'll come, then head home.
I'll come. More soon.  I'll be...
   ⇝ Time for bed. The situation with Annie can wait.
You strip quickly, and you lie down...
   ⇝ ... cuddle up to Allison for the night.
There's a moment of silence. Her...
   ⇝ The next morning you wake up alone.
The Butterfly Effect
   
The Butterfly Effect
   ⇝ You text Annie.
We should make plans. Yessir. What...
   ⇝ I'll find a hotel nearby.
We should make plans. Yessir. What...
   ⇝ I can't believe a guy would just leave you.
We should make plans. Yessir. What...
   ⇝ I've missed sex with you.
We should make plans. Yessir. What...
   ⇝ Tell me.
We should make plans. Yessir. What...
   ⇝ Then you text your friend.
Hey. Can we get together today? I...
   ⇝ I'm flying out to see Annie.
Hey. Can we get together today? I...
   ⇝ No. That's why I need some advice.
Hey. Can we get together today? I...
   ⇝ Perfect. See you then.
Hey. Can we get together today? I...
   ⇝ And then you call Allison.
"Hi!" she says. She sounds very...
   ⇝ ... head off to work.
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Had to get out of the apartment."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Pretty much. I'm going to be off on Friday, by the way."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "My ex-wife is in some kind of trouble. Going to help her out."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ And then you get back to work.
You can smell a hint of Emma's...
   ⇝ And then you work until it's time for your date with your friend.
You and Lorelei have been friends...
   ⇝ You bring up going to see Annie.
You pause before you speak. "I'm...
   ⇝ "Her new guy left, and she's panicking?"
You pause before you speak. "I'm...
   ⇝ "I also wanted to talk about Allison."
You pause before you speak. "I'm...
   ⇝ "I have this feeling she's cheating on me."
You pause before you speak. "I'm...
   ⇝ "She's seemed much more sexual. That often means a new lover."
You pause before you speak. "I'm...
   ⇝ "It just seems unlike her."
You pause before you speak. "I'm...
   ⇝ "Yes! How did you know?"
You pause before you speak. "I'm...
   ⇝ "Perhaps mind control explains Renée's new breasts."
You pause before you speak. "I'm...
   ⇝ You give her a chaste kiss, take your leave, and head home.
When you get home, to make your way...
   ⇝ You help her up, and head to dinner.
You help Allison into her coat...
   ⇝ You knock.
You really do like Dante and Renée...
   ⇝ "Excuse me for a moment." You duck to the bathroom.
You pull out your phone. Annie's...
   ⇝ So, you follow Renée into the kitchen, having taken the ring.
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "How did you know about that?"
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "Really, I'm just hoping to fuck her."
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "Yes. I'm just surprised Annie is on board with this plan."
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "Yes, I brainwashed her to accept my seeing other women."
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ "As tempting as it is, I must decline. But thank you."
When you get to the kitchen, there's...
   ⇝ You follow her back to the living room.
As you come into the living room...
   ⇝ You ask what the conversation you walked into was.
"Dante had a question for me. We can...
   ⇝ As the evening winds down, you say your goodbyes.
As you walk to the car, your eye is...
   ⇝ You decide not to mention it.
The Girlfriend Experience
   
You get to the car, and open the...
   ⇝ "No! What makes you think that?"
"Because I know what Renée is like...
   ⇝ "Is everything OK? You've been acting different lately."
"Because I know what Renée is like...
   ⇝ You finish the drive home.
The moment the door is closed...
   ⇝ Excuse yourself to the bathroom.
You break off, and look into her...
   ⇝ ... join Allison in the bedroom.
She's already naked in bed when you...
   ⇝ "I have something I want to do to you."
She slowly opens her legs, and looks...
   ⇝ "Let's talk about our relationship."
She slowly opens her legs, and looks...
   ⇝ "You want to be my sex-slave."
She slowly opens her legs, and looks...
   ⇝ "You can't resist. You'll be my sex-slave."
She slowly opens her legs, and looks...
   ⇝ "Don't fight it. Just obey."
She slowly opens her legs, and looks...
   ⇝ "Submit to me. You are my sex-slave, Allison."
She slowly opens her legs, and looks...
   ⇝ "You will let me come on you."
You continue to finger her, as she...
   ⇝ You come on her stomach.
The instant the cum hits her...
   ⇝ ... hand her a towel.
"Thank you, kind sir." She gets the...
   ⇝ And then you dream.
coming home to them
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
her tits felt great
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
right up on the meeting room table
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
girlfriend not whore now
   ⇝ And then during the night...

The thing that felt most rushed to me was Holly’s abrupt turn never seemed adequately explained. She comes in with a fear of hypnosis and having successfully escaped from hypnotic enslavement which she (in retrospect) did not seem to enjoy. As soon as she is hypnotized by Stephen, she is suddenly egging him on to do all the things to her that drove her to escape from her previous master. Will she again be driven to escape from Stephen in a few years? Will she try to ‘rescue’ Noelle? Was there something not mentioned that her previous master did that drove her ro break free that Stephen isn’t going to do? And what about Naomi?

It was a very nice story. Engaging characters and very sexy. But, towards the end, the story definitely felt ‘rushed’. We didn’t really get to see Holly being seduced. It was just ‘flip a switch and BANG! Hypno-slave again.’ Just my opinion, of course.

Yeah, this too, going back to the previous issue.  Thought the hero would have to work harder to bring Holly around.

The thing that felt most rushed to me was Holly’s abrupt turn never seemed adequately explained. She comes in with a fear of hypnosis and having successfully escaped from hypnotic enslavement which she (in retrospect) did not seem to enjoy. As soon as she is hypnotized by Stephen, she is suddenly egging him on to do all the things to her that drove her to escape from her previous master. Will she again be driven to escape from Stephen in a few years? Will she try to ‘rescue’ Noelle? Was there something not mentioned that her previous master did that drove her ro break free that Stephen isn’t going to do? And what about Naomi?

It was a very nice story. Engaging characters and very sexy. But, towards the end, the story definitely felt ‘rushed’. We didn’t really get to see Holly being seduced. It was just ‘flip a switch and BANG! Hypno-slave again.’ Just my opinion, of course.

The mother-daughter issues are always the sexiest.

An excellent issue and sorry to see the series end - my only downside is that it felt a touch rushed so while ending with Noelle and the wedding was good it felt more like a holly issue that then ended the series - one or two more issues to integrate both slaves further and show some more programming and commands and returning to the Noelle focus would have been amazing but its without doubt been a great series!

Ha!  This is *exactly* what I was coming to this forum to say.  It did seem rushed!  I thought that there would be more involved in making Holly a slave, bringing her home, integrating her and Noelle together.  I mean, we did see in prior issues that Noelle's enslavement was pretty much complete, and of course Holly actually asked to be a slave--but yes, it felt rushed.  I was surprised to see this series end this soon.  One wonders if production delays were an incentive to cut it short.

Anyway, overall, an excellent comic, one of the best issued recently.  Story, art, all excellent.

In addition to the Married/Marriage on the car, pg 10 panel 2 "Say right there" should probably be "Stay right there."

Very much enjoyed this series.  Though I agree with others it could have been one longer, locking Holly in this issues and then a full issue of marriage events.

Something surprising playing with choices I don't usually make, a type of error I don't think I've seen before -- the space for an illustration is occupied instead by the text "P4TextAnnie-sorry_forgive"

A Phone Pings
   ⇝ Something tells you that you should stop and look.
"I should check, I'm sorry," you...
   ⇝ This can be dealt with later.
She looks back questioningly...
   ⇝ You need to come in her tonight; just let it happen.
You give a low moan as you come...
   ⇝ "Nothing important. Now, we both have big days tomorrow."
You have an erotic dream that night...
   ⇝ The next morning you decide to sleep in.
Memory Lane
   
Allison is already up and out of bed...
   ⇝ You find one that reminds you of that time with Natalia.
The two of you were hanging out in a...
   ⇝ OK time for breakfast.
At breakfast, Allison asks, "What...
   ⇝ Call a friend who might know what's up.
To your amazement, Lorelei actually...
   ⇝ Unfortunately you have to get to work.
Just as you sit down at work, you...
   ⇝ I could never say no to you.  What's going on?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ How could anyone walk out on you?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ I miss you too. What can I do for you?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ I'd like that. Let me check with work.
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ Then you get to work; it's better to talk with Allison about this in person.
You arrive back at the apartment...
   ⇝ Time for bed. The situation with Annie can wait.
You strip quickly, and you lie down...
   ⇝ ... cuddle up to Allison for the night.
There's a moment of silence. Her...
   ⇝ The next morning you wake up alone.
The Butterfly Effect
   
The Butterfly Effect
   ⇝ You check your phone.
Any news?
   ⇝ I want to. But it's taking a big risk.
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ You're awfully tempting.
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ The sex is the most tempting part.
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ Really?
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ I'll come. And I will hold you to that.
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ And then you call Allison.
"Hello," she says, her voice sultry...
   ⇝ ... head off to work.
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Wanted to remind them I work here. What are you up to?"
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "She's doing great! How's... I'm sorry, I've forgotten his name."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "What happened?"
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "We should grab coffee sometime. Away from work."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Of course! I think you two would get along great."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ And then you get back to work.
You can smell a hint of Emma's...
   ⇝ And then you work until it's time to head home.
When you get home, to make your way...
   ⇝ You help her up, and head to dinner.
As you head out the door, you say...
   ⇝ You knock.
You really do like Dante and Renée...
   ⇝ "Oh! Let me help."
You help carry the dishes into the...
   ⇝ "Things are great. Better than ever."
You help carry the dishes into the...
   ⇝ "She's fine with me fucking Annie."
You help carry the dishes into the...
   ⇝ "How can I say no to that?"
"I was hoping you'd say yes," she...
   ⇝ You follow her back to the living room.
As you come into the living room...
   ⇝ You return to the subject of Renée's boobs.
As Renée sits down, you compliment...
   ⇝ As the evening winds down, you say your goodbyes.
As you walk to the car, your eye is...
   ⇝ You decide not to mention it.
The Girlfriend Experience
   
You get to the car, and open the...
   ⇝ "No! What makes you think that?"
She gives you a bit of side-eye, but...
   ⇝ You say nothing further, and finish the drive home.
The moment the door is closed...
   ⇝ Excuse yourself to the bathroom.
You break off, and look into her...
   ⇝ ... join Allison in the bedroom.
Allison is waiting for you on the...
   ⇝ "With pleasure, slave."
Even though you've already been...
   ⇝ You decide to explore her being your sex-slave.
Even though you've already been...
   ⇝ Then you focus on what you are doing with her.
She looks up at you. "Let me do the...
   ⇝ Then say, "I want to come on your face."
You move into position as she...
   ⇝ ... hand her a towel.
"Thank you, Master." She gets the...
   ⇝ And then you dream.
coming home to them
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
mouth-fucked her every day
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
she got so turned on giving a lap dance
   ⇝ And then the next morning...
Relationship Goals
   
Allison gives you a flirty smile as...
   ⇝ "I should see Lorelei before I leave."
"Give her my love," she says. "And...
   ⇝ say, "Come here and drop, slave."
She smiles, and gives you a small...
   ⇝ You decide to come on her face.
You look down at her. "I want to...
   ⇝ You hand her a napkin.
"Thank you, sir," she says, taking...
   ⇝ ... stand and collect your dishes from the table.
She stands up, collecting the...
   ⇝ You head to work.
As you sit down at work, your phone...
   ⇝ You text Allison.
I love coming on your face. I just...
   ⇝ And then you text Annie back.
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ I'm not going to get you in trouble with your ex, am I?
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ I didn't get a hotel room.
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ All is forgiven.
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ I'll just accept my apology in sexual favors.

So as they're getting into the car, the sign on the back of the car says 'Just Marriage' rather than 'Just Married'. A lovely issue, sorry to see it end, yet at the same time, glad to know it is over with so many stories awaiting their end still.

i now realize that you meant the addiction cock instead of the swinging hypno cock. Now it makes sense why I wasnt getting bimbo allison

Well, technically you can get Bimbo Allison in a Hypnosis run, but Renee must be the dominant Mind Controller instead of you.

An excellent issue and sorry to see the series end - my only downside is that it felt a touch rushed so while ending with Noelle and the wedding was good it felt more like a holly issue that then ended the series - one or two more issues to integrate both slaves further and show some more programming and commands and returning to the Noelle focus would have been amazing but its without doubt been a great series!