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The thing that felt most rushed to me was Holly’s abrupt turn never seemed adequately explained. She comes in with a fear of hypnosis and having successfully escaped from hypnotic enslavement which she (in retrospect) did not seem to enjoy. As soon as she is hypnotized by Stephen, she is suddenly egging him on to do all the things to her that drove her to escape from her previous master. Will she again be driven to escape from Stephen in a few years? Will she try to ‘rescue’ Noelle? Was there something not mentioned that her previous master did that drove her ro break free that Stephen isn’t going to do? And what about Naomi?

It was a very nice story. Engaging characters and very sexy. But, towards the end, the story definitely felt ‘rushed’. We didn’t really get to see Holly being seduced. It was just ‘flip a switch and BANG! Hypno-slave again.’ Just my opinion, of course.

The mother-daughter issues are always the sexiest.

An excellent issue and sorry to see the series end - my only downside is that it felt a touch rushed so while ending with Noelle and the wedding was good it felt more like a holly issue that then ended the series - one or two more issues to integrate both slaves further and show some more programming and commands and returning to the Noelle focus would have been amazing but its without doubt been a great series!

Ha!  This is *exactly* what I was coming to this forum to say.  It did seem rushed!  I thought that there would be more involved in making Holly a slave, bringing her home, integrating her and Noelle together.  I mean, we did see in prior issues that Noelle's enslavement was pretty much complete, and of course Holly actually asked to be a slave--but yes, it felt rushed.  I was surprised to see this series end this soon.  One wonders if production delays were an incentive to cut it short.

Anyway, overall, an excellent comic, one of the best issued recently.  Story, art, all excellent.

In addition to the Married/Marriage on the car, pg 10 panel 2 "Say right there" should probably be "Stay right there."

Very much enjoyed this series.  Though I agree with others it could have been one longer, locking Holly in this issues and then a full issue of marriage events.

Something surprising playing with choices I don't usually make, a type of error I don't think I've seen before -- the space for an illustration is occupied instead by the text "P4TextAnnie-sorry_forgive"

A Phone Pings
   ⇝ Something tells you that you should stop and look.
"I should check, I'm sorry," you...
   ⇝ This can be dealt with later.
She looks back questioningly...
   ⇝ You need to come in her tonight; just let it happen.
You give a low moan as you come...
   ⇝ "Nothing important. Now, we both have big days tomorrow."
You have an erotic dream that night...
   ⇝ The next morning you decide to sleep in.
Memory Lane
   
Allison is already up and out of bed...
   ⇝ You find one that reminds you of that time with Natalia.
The two of you were hanging out in a...
   ⇝ OK time for breakfast.
At breakfast, Allison asks, "What...
   ⇝ Call a friend who might know what's up.
To your amazement, Lorelei actually...
   ⇝ Unfortunately you have to get to work.
Just as you sit down at work, you...
   ⇝ I could never say no to you.  What's going on?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ How could anyone walk out on you?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ I miss you too. What can I do for you?
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ I'd like that. Let me check with work.
Sorry I couldn't pick up earlier...
   ⇝ Then you get to work; it's better to talk with Allison about this in person.
You arrive back at the apartment...
   ⇝ Time for bed. The situation with Annie can wait.
You strip quickly, and you lie down...
   ⇝ ... cuddle up to Allison for the night.
There's a moment of silence. Her...
   ⇝ The next morning you wake up alone.
The Butterfly Effect
   
The Butterfly Effect
   ⇝ You check your phone.
Any news?
   ⇝ I want to. But it's taking a big risk.
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ You're awfully tempting.
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ The sex is the most tempting part.
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ Really?
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ I'll come. And I will hold you to that.
Any news?  I want to. But it's...
   ⇝ And then you call Allison.
"Hello," she says, her voice sultry...
   ⇝ ... head off to work.
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Wanted to remind them I work here. What are you up to?"
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "She's doing great! How's... I'm sorry, I've forgotten his name."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "What happened?"
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "We should grab coffee sometime. Away from work."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ "Of course! I think you two would get along great."
You sit down in your cube. The...
   ⇝ And then you get back to work.
You can smell a hint of Emma's...
   ⇝ And then you work until it's time to head home.
When you get home, to make your way...
   ⇝ You help her up, and head to dinner.
As you head out the door, you say...
   ⇝ You knock.
You really do like Dante and Renée...
   ⇝ "Oh! Let me help."
You help carry the dishes into the...
   ⇝ "Things are great. Better than ever."
You help carry the dishes into the...
   ⇝ "She's fine with me fucking Annie."
You help carry the dishes into the...
   ⇝ "How can I say no to that?"
"I was hoping you'd say yes," she...
   ⇝ You follow her back to the living room.
As you come into the living room...
   ⇝ You return to the subject of Renée's boobs.
As Renée sits down, you compliment...
   ⇝ As the evening winds down, you say your goodbyes.
As you walk to the car, your eye is...
   ⇝ You decide not to mention it.
The Girlfriend Experience
   
You get to the car, and open the...
   ⇝ "No! What makes you think that?"
She gives you a bit of side-eye, but...
   ⇝ You say nothing further, and finish the drive home.
The moment the door is closed...
   ⇝ Excuse yourself to the bathroom.
You break off, and look into her...
   ⇝ ... join Allison in the bedroom.
Allison is waiting for you on the...
   ⇝ "With pleasure, slave."
Even though you've already been...
   ⇝ You decide to explore her being your sex-slave.
Even though you've already been...
   ⇝ Then you focus on what you are doing with her.
She looks up at you. "Let me do the...
   ⇝ Then say, "I want to come on your face."
You move into position as she...
   ⇝ ... hand her a towel.
"Thank you, Master." She gets the...
   ⇝ And then you dream.
coming home to them
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
mouth-fucked her every day
   ⇝ And then your dream continues.
she got so turned on giving a lap dance
   ⇝ And then the next morning...
Relationship Goals
   
Allison gives you a flirty smile as...
   ⇝ "I should see Lorelei before I leave."
"Give her my love," she says. "And...
   ⇝ say, "Come here and drop, slave."
She smiles, and gives you a small...
   ⇝ You decide to come on her face.
You look down at her. "I want to...
   ⇝ You hand her a napkin.
"Thank you, sir," she says, taking...
   ⇝ ... stand and collect your dishes from the table.
She stands up, collecting the...
   ⇝ You head to work.
As you sit down at work, your phone...
   ⇝ You text Allison.
I love coming on your face. I just...
   ⇝ And then you text Annie back.
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ I'm not going to get you in trouble with your ex, am I?
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ I didn't get a hotel room.
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ All is forgiven.
Before texting her back, you make...
   ⇝ I'll just accept my apology in sexual favors.

So as they're getting into the car, the sign on the back of the car says 'Just Marriage' rather than 'Just Married'. A lovely issue, sorry to see it end, yet at the same time, glad to know it is over with so many stories awaiting their end still.

i now realize that you meant the addiction cock instead of the swinging hypno cock. Now it makes sense why I wasnt getting bimbo allison

Well, technically you can get Bimbo Allison in a Hypnosis run, but Renee must be the dominant Mind Controller instead of you.

An excellent issue and sorry to see the series end - my only downside is that it felt a touch rushed so while ending with Noelle and the wedding was good it felt more like a holly issue that then ended the series - one or two more issues to integrate both slaves further and show some more programming and commands and returning to the Noelle focus would have been amazing but its without doubt been a great series!

i now realize that you meant the addiction cock instead of the swinging hypno cock. Now it makes sense why I wasnt getting bimbo allison

Goals!



Script: Daphne • Line Art: Diego Trigo • Colors: Melody Layton • Lettering: George Zipp