|
Title: Hellbent: Blood Skull Post by: Daphne on October 16, 2021, 12:02:15 am Zotak is beset on all sides by threats magical and otherwise, but he has a very special ability to assist him…
(https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/images/hellbent/i01/hellbent-i01-p00.png) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/hellbent/i01/preview) Script: Plutonian Knight • Line Art: Richard Rasch • Colors and Lettering: Octavia Moon Title: Re: Hellbent: Blood Skull Post by: crazydorian on October 16, 2021, 09:25:09 pm Looks interesting!
Title: Re: Hellbent: Blood Skull Post by: elenchos on October 20, 2021, 07:22:13 am This is AMAZING. More, please!
Title: Re: Hellbent: Blood Skull Post by: hereno on October 20, 2021, 11:59:15 am This was great! Tons of narrative potential too; well seeded. I will say that you kind of blitzed through a lot of plot points and character introductions, so if you're looking for advice, I'd tune the pacing down a tad.
Title: Re: Hellbent: Blood Skull Post by: caseyx on October 20, 2021, 03:40:21 pm Very cool.
As for pacing, I'm guessing that this is only intended to be a short series so you kind of have to shovel a lot in there. Title: Re: Hellbent: Blood Skull Post by: elenchos on October 21, 2021, 05:17:56 am This was great! Tons of narrative potential too; well seeded. I will say that you kind of blitzed through a lot of plot points and character introductions, so if you're looking for advice, I'd tune the pacing down a tad. Remember that this one's by PK. :) Excellent swords & sorcery flavor, like a real REH story. |