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The Letters Page -- WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS => The Long Box => Topic started by: Daphne on February 24, 2014, 10:10:35 am



Title: Sparkle
Post by: Daphne on February 24, 2014, 10:10:35 am
There's a new spa in town, and it is a truly life-changing experience...

(http://mindcontrolcomics.com/covers/sparkle-p00.jpg)

Art by Octavia Moon!


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: Werdna on February 24, 2014, 10:27:24 am
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Art by Octavia Moon!

Well, she's one half of the art team absolutely ripping it up at SJI, so I"m crazy excited for this.  Based solely on the cover art, this looks great.


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: laguna85 on February 24, 2014, 12:39:51 pm
Well I have say yes it's a Truly life body
special oil or shampoo that put the women into a Mind Control  or change there body?
So come out Wednesday wow ;D


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: Salanar on February 25, 2014, 03:03:50 am
Looks very promising! :D


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: jmundt29 on February 25, 2014, 08:49:35 am
This looks absolutely spectacular! ;D


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: laguna85 on February 25, 2014, 05:04:54 pm
We hope in about 7 more hours we get to see the First pages of Sparkle
what Mind control will be done



Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: Salanar on February 26, 2014, 06:26:58 am
Great work all! It looks amazing and its different take on the MC theme than I expected. I very much like the path this is on. Keep up the great work!


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: laguna85 on February 26, 2014, 08:20:57 am
The Sparkle unit is great
the Spa turn each lady in a mind less sex slave and service in a gentleman club
What happen when the unit is take out?
Great ART work
Spa fix there make-up on the face to make them more sexly

think this may be one-shots


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: Werdna on February 26, 2014, 10:41:48 am
Excellent start!  Looking forward to more.


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: GodWilling on February 26, 2014, 12:16:15 pm
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Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: mns_95125 on February 26, 2014, 01:39:38 pm
So, basically mind control suppositories.  Well, whatever works...


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: OctaviaMoon on February 26, 2014, 04:34:15 pm
Thank you for the compliments everyone :D


One thing that did puzzle me: is there supposed to be some speech in the bottom panel of page 11? Or am I missing some subtlety of the "implant"?

Looking back at it I probably made her a bit dopier looking than I should...she was meant to look a little blank. The time for talking had passed :)


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: laguna85 on March 01, 2014, 05:44:34 pm
Your art work over the top!!!

I keep coming back read this Comice and love it
Shame it it may be one shot. :'(


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: laguna85 on March 02, 2014, 07:07:56 pm
Lily in the the club do a lot fast put clothes on and off ::) :o
the continuity is little off
First Time we see her in the club she have on a white top & Black skirt
Like Lily doing a blow job and have her black top on

No clothes
sorry :-\
Still great comics :-*


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: Prezfevr18 on March 03, 2014, 10:56:49 am
Was I wrong for expecting there to be a Mr. Sparkle reference or cameo somewhere in here?


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: laguna85 on March 23, 2014, 09:07:20 pm
the word balloon on page 6 is that in Lity head or it come over the subway PA system



Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: OctaviaMoon on March 24, 2014, 05:15:55 am
Lily in the the club do a lot fast put clothes on and off ::) :o
the continuity is little off
First Time we see her in the club she have on a white top & Black skirt
Like Lily doing a blow job and have her black top on

No clothes
sorry :-\
Still great comics :-*

I think you have to look at them as occurring over time (not a long time) with some captured like when a film, instead of showing someone actually undressing, will show the person in different states of undress. It was supposed to convey moving through time - would you really need to see every little button or zip being undone (or done up) to know someone has undone or done up their zip or button?

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Was I wrong for expecting there to be a Mr. Sparkle reference or cameo somewhere in here?
I think it's in someone's desk draw ;)

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the word balloon on page 6 is that in Lity head or it come over the subway PA system
Usually, for speech coming down a telephone or (in this case) over a PA system the balloon outline is jagged - thought balloons would be rounded and joined to the thinker via a series of bubbles - so it is the PA system in the railway carriage....


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: Daphne on March 24, 2014, 05:40:42 am
A new page in a comic is like a cut in a movie, as Octavia says: Unless you see the same people in the same place wearing the same things at the same time, you can't assume it is the same time.


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: Prezfevr18 on March 24, 2014, 09:55:07 pm
A new page in a comic is like a cut in a movie, as Octavia says: Unless you see the same people in the same place wearing the same things at the same time, you can't assume it is the same time.

And that matters to the Tralfamadorian subscribers to your site how?


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: merryweather on June 06, 2014, 09:18:00 am
Really impressive. Olivia, do you do you any other comics?

(I'll understand if you don't want to mix SFW work with your art here). 


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: OctaviaMoon on June 07, 2014, 04:27:26 am
Thank you for the appreciation :)

I have more work on Deviant Art - http://colorist-octaviamoon.deviantart.com/ where you will also find a link to a comic I am creating...


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: laguna85 on June 07, 2014, 09:49:59 am
I hope Sparkle is not one shot comics a part two will be nice Please


Title: Re: Sparkle
Post by: vortingan on November 26, 2014, 12:52:12 am
Just resubscribed and catching up on all the comics I missed out on the past year or so.  I like this one a lot for its method of control and would love to see something like this make its way into one of the live action movies  ;)

I think what I enjoy so much about it is that it's a physical object added as a form of control, much like a probe, and something that is a constant physical reminder.  I like the fact that it's in a place that is 'out of sight' so it's not as obvious to all as say, the rubies in Beyond Rubies, but is revealed to those in the know.  It's also quite a bit hotter that the 'Sparkle' is much more naturally uncomfortable than say a bracelet or choker, which makes the conversion all the better when it's more than 'hey just slip this on.'  It's different and variety is great!