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Title: By the Book #10 Post by: Daphne on October 17, 2013, 09:37:06 pm (http://mindcontrolcomics.com/covers/by_the_book-i10-p00.jpg)
Title: Re: By the Book #10 Post by: Werdna on October 18, 2013, 12:26:02 pm Since this series is one of my favourites, I'm very happy to see this forthcoming. More Karen, which is good, but I also hope for Mia's husband's goth lover to make an appearance.
Title: Re: By the Book #10 Post by: Daphne on October 18, 2013, 12:26:54 pm Since this series is one of my favourites, I'm very happy to see this forthcoming. More Karen, which is good, but I also hope for Mia's husband's goth lover to make an appearance. There's probably a Chekhov's Chick rule there. Title: Re: By the Book #10 Post by: Werdna on October 18, 2013, 12:30:55 pm Quote Chekhov's Chick I believe the rule is that, in erotic MC fiction, if you mention the possibility of a hot, big-boobed goth maid in Act 8, she has to get off by the end of Act 12. But I may be misremembering that. Title: Re: By the Book #10 Post by: stormrazor2000 on October 23, 2013, 10:19:40 am Excellent installment!
Title: Re: By the Book #10 Post by: Haight on October 23, 2013, 01:59:23 pm Charlotte's a fun girl.
Title: Re: By the Book #10 Post by: Werdna on October 24, 2013, 06:06:41 am Better and better. I thought the fact that Charlotte left those two messages was possibly the hottest thing in the series so far, with the sort of taken-for-granted enthusiasm behind the motivation for doing so.
Title: Re: By the Book #10 Post by: carmel0 on October 24, 2013, 05:02:03 pm Great story. So many great sub plots. Any chance of a three peat like you did when you first introduced the story??
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