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Title: By the Book #9 Post by: Daphne on August 21, 2013, 12:32:38 am (http://mindcontrolcomics.com/covers/by_the_book-i09-p00.jpg)
Our hero seems to have found a helper... Title: Re: By the Book #9 Post by: carmel0 on August 21, 2013, 08:42:17 am This is one of the best stories you have published. I hope there are many more chapters to follow.
Title: Re: By the Book #9 Post by: Haight on August 21, 2013, 09:32:52 am Serial recruitment in general is hot, and this story does it right. Can't wait to see this big-tittied goth chick get hers as well.
Title: Re: By the Book #9 Post by: carmel0 on August 22, 2013, 02:13:41 pm What I like is you don't abandon the prior recruits. Their individual stories are all good so keeping them in the story line makes it more interesting. Sometimes there is a tendency to keep adding new conquests and not develop the existing ones. The Nikki/Katie relationship is a great example. Curious what you have in mind for Annie and Karen?? Again, great story.
Title: Re: By the Book #9 Post by: Werdna on August 28, 2013, 11:17:30 am Quote Can't wait to see this big-tittied goth chick get hers as well. Totally agreed. That's been teased in both this and the previous issue, and the anticipation has been building... Title: Re: By the Book #9 Post by: Geo on August 28, 2013, 09:31:02 pm Fools. The Goth chick is a Vampire. Daphne is introducing her now so that when she gets tired of writing By the Book, the Goth can rip the MCer's throat out, and when people flip out she can point to all of the set-up and say, "What? you didn't see this coming?"
This is all classic misdirection. Muhuhahahahahahahahaha! Title: Re: By the Book #9 Post by: Daphne on August 28, 2013, 09:49:05 pm No spoilers.
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