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Script: Daphne • Line Art: Diego Trigo • Colors: Melody Layton • Lettering: George Zipp

An excellent issue and sorry to see the series end - my only downside is that it felt a touch rushed so while ending with Noelle and the wedding was good it felt more like a holly issue that then ended the series - one or two more issues to integrate both slaves further and show some more programming and commands and returning to the Noelle focus would have been amazing but its without doubt been a great series!

So as they're getting into the car, the sign on the back of the car says 'Just Marriage' rather than 'Just Married'. A lovely issue, sorry to see it end, yet at the same time, glad to know it is over with so many stories awaiting their end still.

In addition to the Married/Marriage on the car, pg 10 panel 2 "Say right there" should probably be "Stay right there."

Very much enjoyed this series.  Though I agree with others it could have been one longer, locking Holly in this issues and then a full issue of marriage events.

Ha!  This is *exactly* what I was coming to this forum to say.  It did seem rushed!  I thought that there would be more involved in making Holly a slave, bringing her home, integrating her and Noelle together.  I mean, we did see in prior issues that Noelle's enslavement was pretty much complete, and of course Holly actually asked to be a slave--but yes, it felt rushed.  I was surprised to see this series end this soon.  One wonders if production delays were an incentive to cut it short.

Anyway, overall, an excellent comic, one of the best issued recently.  Story, art, all excellent.

The thing that felt most rushed to me was Holly’s abrupt turn never seemed adequately explained. She comes in with a fear of hypnosis and having successfully escaped from hypnotic enslavement which she (in retrospect) did not seem to enjoy. As soon as she is hypnotized by Stephen, she is suddenly egging him on to do all the things to her that drove her to escape from her previous master. Will she again be driven to escape from Stephen in a few years? Will she try to ‘rescue’ Noelle? Was there something not mentioned that her previous master did that drove her ro break free that Stephen isn’t going to do? And what about Naomi?

It was a very nice story. Engaging characters and very sexy. But, towards the end, the story definitely felt ‘rushed’. We didn’t really get to see Holly being seduced. It was just ‘flip a switch and BANG! Hypno-slave again.’ Just my opinion, of course.

Yeah, this too, going back to the previous issue.  Thought the hero would have to work harder to bring Holly around.