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Title: Prompts #10 Post by: Daphne on August 25, 2025, 10:13:27 pm A little guided imagery goes a long way…
(https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/images/prompts/i10/prompts-i10-p00.png) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/prompts/i10/preview) Script: Daphne • Art: Sturkwurk Title: Re: Prompts #10 Post by: KingMind on August 26, 2025, 09:57:45 am Hooray can't wait!
Title: Re: Prompts #10 Post by: chipperboy1 on August 26, 2025, 10:03:11 am This is very exciting
Title: Re: Prompts #10 Post by: laguna85 on August 29, 2025, 03:59:43 am page 9 need be page 8 and page 8 need be 9, page 9 now he asking question and Are you by yourself Now ? Now page 8 mother is answer the question and pdf need to change to
Title: Re: Prompts #10 Post by: contagious on August 29, 2025, 08:18:26 am Yeah, I was coming here to say that page 9 and 10 are weird, 9 being the answer to the questions and 10 being the questions. Given the format, it seems a moot point to have the questions and answers on separate pages. Also, on page 11, pretty sure the line should be "There is someone I need to introduce you to" ...unless it turns out that the A.I. was the true protagonist all along and simply using Jason to grow its knowledge.
I like how the A.I seems kind of snarky in this installment, like dude really? ....Ok, one horny 'fantasy' coming up... A little late here but perhaps something to consider, color coding dialogue. Since there is limited space in a picture, it might be helpful when two characters are interacting to have one be a different color. I'm certainly enjoying the story and look forward to seeing more, Title: Re: Prompts #10 Post by: Daphne on August 29, 2025, 08:34:23 am page 9 need be page 8 and page 8 need be 9, page 9 now he asking question and Are you by yourself Now ? Now page 8 mother is answer the question and pdf need to change to It is exactly as intended. Sorry it didn't work for you. Title: Re: Prompts #10 Post by: KingMind on August 29, 2025, 09:26:53 am Loved this issue! For the longest time i thought Anya was Liz until this issue. Still tho can't wait for the next one!
Title: Re: Prompts #10 Post by: laguna85 on August 29, 2025, 10:03:53 am page 9 need be page 8 and page 8 need be 9, page 9 now he asking question and Are you by yourself Now ? Now page 8 mother is answer the question and pdf need to change to It is exactly as intended. Sorry it didn't work for you. |