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Title: Ctrl-Shift-Command Post by: Daphne on September 28, 2024, 12:03:15 am Beau is having serious trouble getting a date (or even getting his date to finish her meal). But he has a new tactic in the dating game…
(https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/images/ctrl_shift_command/i01/ctrl_shift_command-i01-p00.png) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/ctrl_shift_command/i01/preview) Script and Art: Octavia Moon Title: Re: Ctrl-Shift-Command Post by: mns_95125 on October 02, 2024, 12:11:35 am Ok, I'm intrigued.
Minor continuity error, though? On page 3 Gray's mom wants him to get a job, but on page 7 he has a boss? Was he job hunting off screen in the interim? Title: Re: Ctrl-Shift-Command Post by: The Mad Bishop on October 02, 2024, 10:23:47 am He's probably WFH, freelance & piece work. Boomers don't think WFH is "real work," trust me. ::) May also explain how he was able to find enough time to customize a very advanced & ethically questionable piece of software.
The banter in this one is top shelf and amusingly witty. Title: Re: Ctrl-Shift-Command Post by: mns_95125 on October 02, 2024, 03:42:56 pm Agreed on the banter; this was a fun read and established character personality quickly and effectively.
On WFH... I suppose I'd be considered a 'boomer' by today's youth (although I'm actually GenX and nothing annoys us more than being lumped in with the baby boomers) and I'm a big fan of remote work - to the point of joking about supporting the COVID virus because of how much it improved my life. But I see your point. It might have been clearer if she'd said something like "Get a real job." Still, in the end a minor nitpick. Title: Re: Ctrl-Shift-Command Post by: OctaviaMoon on October 03, 2024, 12:04:12 am Should have made it clearer - she was his boss but isn't anymore :)
I'm so glad you liked it...I will get the next issue out as soon as I possibly can :) Title: Re: Ctrl-Shift-Command Post by: ozymandias on October 03, 2024, 11:44:02 am I just wanna know what game it is that you can play as a hot mostly-naked woman.
Title: Re: Ctrl-Shift-Command Post by: mns_95125 on October 03, 2024, 07:14:05 pm Stellar Blade?
Title: Re: Ctrl-Shift-Command Post by: Bloodly on October 05, 2024, 05:18:12 pm "I just wanna know what game it is that you can play as a hot mostly-naked woman."
The closest that ever existed as far as I know was something called 'Scarlet Blade', but it's been dead a long time now. |