Mind Control Comics Forum

An idea that I had for a story. Unfortunately I don’t have much free time on my hands lately so I’ll put it up here, either for a member to make as their own or to be made into a comic (which would be incredible, but not getting my hopes up). This was inspired by the story “The Stepford Wives” but pushed into more explicit territory. I’m not feeling very creative at the moment so the names of characters are fairly generic.

A young couple, Alice and Bob Smith, recently married moves to the town of Cherry Hill. Alice is a real estate agent and every bit a career woman, aggressive, no-nonsense and always working. Her husband Bob is a computer programmer and much more laid back. Though the two were in love during the honeymoon phase, it is clear now that Alice considers her marriage secondary to her relationship to her husband’s dismay.

As they settle into their new house, Alice expresses her discontent in a passive-aggressive manner, upset that they have moved away from fast paced city life she enjoys. Cherry Hill is a small town and appears to have come out of the 1950’s. Big backyards, white picket fences and all. Bob promises that the more relaxed environment will be good for them and hopes Alice will come around. It turns out that Bob was the strong proponent of the move because he was invited to work for a computer company in Cherry Hill, and Alice begrudgingly agreed to move as well.

The two are then greeted by their new neighbors, Ken and Jenny Morimoto another young couple and also new to Cherry Hill. The two couples agree to head into town together to explore what there is to do for fun.

Just a few moments later, they are also greeted by an older but still extremely attractive woman who introduces herself as Mrs. Hill, the wife of Mr. Hill whose family established Cherry Hill. Alice is irritated when Bob ogles Mrs. Hill’s still prodigious and perky breasts.

Later, the two meet the Morimotos for their double date to explore the town. As they walk Alice notices speakers are set up throughout the town, mounted on poles or on the side of buildings. Ken explains that when the town was established in the 50’s, a public address radio system was installed to give instructions in case nuclear war with the Soviet Union started. Now they are used by Mr. Hill, the town’s leader to make daily radio news broadcasts.

One such broadcast comes over the airways and Mr. Hill addresses the town. As the broadcast goes on, all the women, included Alice and Jennifer stop dead in their tracks, entranced. The broadcast ends and the women go back to normal, unaware that anything happened.

Alice notices other strange oddities besides the unusual radio address system, like the fact that despite all the women in the town seem uncommonly attractive while the men are quite average. The women are all dressed provocatively as well, despite the conservative 1950’s feel of the town.

Later that night, Alice is preparing to go to bed when suddenly, she becomes incredibly horny and demands Bob fuck her hard.

Fast forward to a few days later. One morning while getting ready in the mirror, Alice realizes that her breasts seem to be growing. She goes to the local health clinic and meets Doctor Charles. She complains of her growing breasts and the Doctor offers to measure her. As he measures her bust, he seems to be ogling her. He then tells Alice that her bust is the same size as it is in her medical records, which is a lie. Alice considers pressing the issue but is already creeped out and goes home. As she leaves, she sees an extremely busty nurse enter the Doctor’s examination room and hears the two starting to have sex.

Later at home, Alice does some digging online and discovers that Mrs. Hill was once much like herself, a career woman in every respect. She became a high ranking member of a law firm at an early age and Alice and wonders what could have happened to make her into the big breasted bimbo she is now.

The days go by and Alice continues to transform. Almost without realizing, she begins to change from frumpy outfits and conservative pant suits to short skirts and thin blouses that show off her growing breasts. She begins to have trouble focusing on work, instead spending her time vacuuming and cleaning and learning how to cook. And she becomes much more horny and submissive in bed.

She doesn’t notice these changes until one day she bumps into a woman in Japanese geisha outfit. It is Jennifer Morimoto. The once petite woman has sprouted a massive pair of melons and her small butt has grown into a veritable booty. The shocking transformation reminds Alice of what is happening to her and she goes back to investigating what is going on in the town.

Alice goes to the town library. She researches the town’s history and discovers that it was established as a social experiment during the Cold War. In case nuclear war ever broke out, the US government considered ways to ensure the country would survive.

Mr. Hill, real name Thomas Hill, approached the government with a plan. Establish a small town, too small to be noticed, too far from major cities to be an appealing target. Make the town self-sufficient, with its own power, water and food supply. And populate the town.

If the rest of the country were destroyed in a nuclear exchange, this tiny town would survive and over time, the inhabitants of the town would spread and repopulate the US. Mr. Hill also invented a radio broadcast signal that is designed to enter women’s brains and adjust hormone production. This is to make women more compliant and obedient to men and increase sex drive, to ensure that as much sex and reproduction would occur and repopulating would occur faster. Alice also finds documents that indicate the changes to hormones also cause breasts to grow while causing women to have a harder time focusing or using higher brain functions.

Alice realizes that the signal is the cause of her transformation but before she can act on this, the Cherry Hill police enter the library. Claiming that she is mentally ill, they arrest her and take her to the town’s sanitarium. 

Bob visits her in the sanitarium, where Alice condemns him for bringing her here and turning her into a bimbo. Bob cheerfully denies these claims and promises the doctors will make her all better, then leaves.

Alice is left in her cell but manages to seduce an orderly and steals the key. She makes her way to the health clinic which is nearby.
She interrogates Doctor Charles about where the radio signal is broadcast from. She hopes that by disabling the signal and freeing the other women from their mind control that she will be able to get some help in escaping the town. Doctor Charles explains that the radio signal is not broadcast from the clinic but rather it is transmitted from Hill Manor and that no one has been up there since Mr. Hill went into seclusion.

Alice grabs some anesthetic gas and doses Doctor Charles with it, knocking him out. She then sneaks into Hill Manor, intent on getting answers or if need be forcing Mr. Hill to arrange for her to escape.

She enters the house and makes her way to Mr. Hill’s office and discovers the microphone that controls all the PA systems but nothing else. When she begins searching the office, she finds a voice modulator that turns her voice into that of Mr. Hill. As she ponders why such a device would be present, something out the window catches her eye.

From the office window, there is an excellent view of the Manor’s expansive backyard. In the backyard is a tombstone and it reads “Mr. Hill, In Memoriam” and the date of death is decades ago.

Suddenly, from the shadows, a hand emerges and plunges a needle into Alice’s neck, knocking her unconscious.

When Alice awakens she is strapped down to a chair. A voice greets her and she turns to find the one who knocked her out with the needle.

It is Mrs. Hill.

Mrs. Hill reveals that her husband died many years ago and that she is the true force running Cherry Hill, in his memory. Alice is shocked and asks why would a woman support the subjugation of other women. Mrs. Hill explains that she was the first subject of the experimental mind control signal. Initially she rejected it, but slowly came to enjoy it. Despite the hard work she had to do, scrubbing and cleaning and maintaining the household, she was free. She never had to think again, never had to worry about paying bills or paying rent, or managing her job. It was a life of pleasure.

After her husband passed away, Mrs. Hill decided to carry on his work, spreading the joy of subservience to other women. Although she was enjoying her life of blissful, ignorant freedom, she decided it was worth sacrificing her pleasure to ensure that the town would survive. She
But she knew that the men of the town would never listen to her, since she was herself a woman. So she took upon her husband’s identity, keeping him alive in spirit and through the radio broadcasts. She pretended that her husband was alive but in seclusion and took any papers or documents herself and managed them in secret to make sure no one would catch on.

Now that Alice has found out Mrs. Hill’s secret, she is a real threat. So Mrs. Hill decides to take more drastic measures. She reveals a radio transmitter much like the one used to mind control the women in the town. This one is designed to be much more focused, and will completely reprogram Alice.

Alice swears she will not break but Mrs. Hill merely smiles knowingly and turns on the device and then leaves the room.

Fast forward again to a few months later, Bob is preparing to leave for work at his computer company. As he leaves, his wife Alice, completely and totally transformed, breasts now larger than her head and an ass to die for, kisses him goodbye. But not a kiss on the lips! ;)