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The Letters Page -- WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS => One-Shots and Short Runs => Topic started by: Daphne on August 03, 2024, 09:00:06 pm



Title: On the Wall
Post by: Daphne on August 03, 2024, 09:00:06 pm
She's applying for a job as a librarian, and everything seems very interesting. But, ugh, that wallpaper!

(https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/images/on_the_wall/i01/on_the_wall-i01-p00.png) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/on_the_wall/i01/preview)

Script: Daphne • Art: Eddie K. • Lettering: George Zipp


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: crazydorian on August 07, 2024, 12:13:57 am
Really enjoyed the art on this one, but looks like this was one of those times it was uploaded without text.

I don't mind that once in a while.  It's like the silent film version of MC ;)


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: JorgeTulio on August 07, 2024, 12:16:55 am
Yellow Wallpaper inspired story? Nice


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: GodWilling on August 07, 2024, 12:34:10 am
Really enjoyed the art on this one, but looks like this was one of those times it was uploaded without text.

I don't mind that once in a while.  It's like the silent film version of MC ;)

I'd guess it's deliberate, since it doesn't really need words. And I suppose the title even works as a reference to this.


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: Daphne on August 07, 2024, 07:32:58 am
A production error on our end, now fixed… but it did work remarkably well without word balloons!


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: mns_95125 on August 07, 2024, 08:52:56 am
It did.  I was legitimately unsure whether it was intended to be that way.


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: Daphne on August 07, 2024, 08:55:40 am
There's a theory of comics that says that the reader should be able to understand the comic without any word balloons, even if some details are missed.

I didn't want to do another wordless comic right away, since we'd just done "Let the Music Play," but I like to do one once in a while as a change of pace.


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: KingMind on August 07, 2024, 10:33:58 am
The text made it so much better.  Loved her development and I always enjoy a sexy librarian.


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: LongPlay on August 07, 2024, 03:42:20 pm
This one really hit the spot. Loved the artwork!


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: snivgrits on August 07, 2024, 04:09:15 pm
Didn't you do this as a EMCSA story a while ago? This seems very familiar....


Title: Re: On the Wall
Post by: crazydorian on August 07, 2024, 11:48:24 pm
Very sexy indeed!