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Title: Prompts #3
Post by: Daphne on September 02, 2023, 12:03:56 am
Jason's plans take a sudden detour when he spots a new tenant in the building.

(https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/images/prompts/i03/prompts-i03-p00.png) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/prompts/i03/preview)

Script: Daphne • Art: Sturkwurk


Title: Re: Prompts #3
Post by: crazydorian on September 13, 2023, 12:34:10 am
As always, love Diana's look in this series. She reminds me a bit of Francesca in 'By the Book', so I might just have a thing for Sturkwurk's dark-haried ladies with dark eyeshadow/eyeliner.  Though Diana's is the darker of the two. :D

Harem-fantasy Diana looks great too!

Page 13 gave me a good chuckle at the meme reference. I wonder if that was in the script or Sturkwurk's addition. ;)

Interesting on the quick-induction with Liz. When she first was non-responsive, I'd expected Jason might need to program Diana for recruitment, but it looks like this is going a different route.





Title: Re: Prompts #3
Post by: arm7man88 on September 13, 2023, 04:14:54 am
VERY nice reference to the classic meme.


Title: Re: Prompts #3
Post by: Daphne on September 13, 2023, 07:03:42 am
I wonder if that was in the script or Sturkwurk's addition. ;)

I will take credit for that one. :-)


Title: Re: Prompts #3
Post by: elenchos on September 13, 2023, 12:33:00 pm
I wonder if that was in the script or Sturkwurk's addition. ;)

I will take credit for that one. :-)

Well-deserved! Great idea.


Title: Re: Prompts #3
Post by: pdobi on September 15, 2023, 05:23:15 am
Really enjoying this series so far. I can see a little bit of "She Did What He Wanted" influence.


Title: Re: Prompts #3
Post by: Vidor on September 18, 2023, 10:17:49 am
The instant induction scene tends to snap disbelief even for MC fantasy--but eh, I guess it doesn't matter, we just want the girls made into sex slaves.

I'd like more dialogue.  Like how Diana is dealing with/manifesting her newfound submissiveness/thoughts about slavery/thoughts about her boyfriend fucking another woman, expressed in dialogue.

Overall, pretty strong story.  Good comic.