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Title: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: Daphne on April 11, 2012, 10:31:26 am
Coming 4/13!


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: Snake on April 11, 2012, 11:55:04 am
very nice  ;D ;D


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: laguna85 on April 11, 2012, 06:13:20 pm
this up date may be good.
Adrian Performance review?
Girls Performance review?
girls performance Review on the pole or strip dancing. wow
School performance
Sex ED Performance yes for me to see.


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: master on April 13, 2012, 02:43:54 am
So...one by one, each of the "new girls" will throw themselves at Adrian...probably "in gratitude"...and claiming it's all of their own volition. (Of course, it may not be "one by one," we may get groups). And we all get to sit & wonder how gullible he's going to be.

But let's face it, we all know which head he will be thinking with. And in similar situations, wouldn't we all?

...at least, until one of them slips up & calls him "Master" in the throes of passion or something.

BTW, i'd love to be wrong here, Daphne. While we would all enjoy the expected, it's your ability to go beyond those limits that makes your work special.


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: jmundt29 on April 13, 2012, 07:00:04 am
Excellent teaser.  Seems like we're closing in on the next splash page.  I have to say I'm interested to see how things are set up for Adrian's break (Good thing Erin doesn't object to minding the store while this happens).

I'm just hoping it isn't delayed by the introduction of a new villain on Jacqui's lunch run.

Beautiful work as always.  One question--what's up with the black-and-red striped knee socks?


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: laguna85 on April 13, 2012, 07:25:25 am
Jacquelyn almost let the sex fox out
she was check on his performance last night and she wwant so.
She almost did a sexual harassment on the job?
Good Time for Erin to stop it.
Adrian may one and one togeter.


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: Daphne on April 13, 2012, 01:50:31 pm
She almost did a sexual harassment on the job?

It's only sexual harassment if it is unwelcome. (I checked with an HR consultant on this one!)


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: elbenton on April 13, 2012, 04:23:18 pm
I know that there's a good chance that Adrian will be thinking with "Little Adrian's" brain (HT master) and not his own, at least for a while. 

Somehow he must sooner or later realize that Erin was the only one of these girls who actually wanted to have sex with him *before* she was hypnotized.

It will be interesting to see what happens.  As has been said before, that's what makes mindcontrolcomics better than the other sites: the writing.


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: laguna85 on April 13, 2012, 07:08:55 pm
Adrian may did unwant sex ::)


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: jmundt29 on April 13, 2012, 07:19:05 pm
Um...well, an argument could be made that Dani was interested, but Dani has been through so many layers of conditioning, it's tough to tell where she stops and the programming begins.  No answer on the knee socks or the perils of getting lunch?


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: Garg22 on April 13, 2012, 09:17:54 pm
Can't wait for the sex scene with Jacqui.  With all the posing she was doing the night before I admit that I probably wouldn't have held back.


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: Daphne on April 13, 2012, 09:52:45 pm
No answer on the knee socks or the perils of getting lunch?

What is there to say about socks? Stripe-y socks rule.


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: powerpossum on April 14, 2012, 04:01:57 am
Seems like we're closing in on the next splash page.

I'm just hoping it isn't delayed by the introduction of a new villain on Jacqui's lunch run.

Beautiful work as always.  One question--what's up with the black-and-red striped knee socks?

We're always closing in on the next splash page!

A new villain? No, it's not a new villain...

Thank you! And I dunno...I just thought they were cute, so I drew 'em on there.

Jacquelyn almost let the sex fox out

Release the sex fox! Further captivity is inhumane!

It's only sexual harassment if it is unwelcome. (I checked with an HR consultant on this one!)

...but how do you know it's unwelcome if you don't check?

Somehow he must sooner or later realize that Erin was the only one of these girls who actually wanted to have sex with him *before* she was hypnotized.

If I remember right, she'd just gotten done giving him the 'it's not you, it's me' speech when it all kicked off...

Um...well, an argument could be made that Dani was interested, but Dani has been through so many layers of conditioning, it's tough to tell where she stops and the programming begins.

Excellent point! What truly lurks beneath all those layers of fluffy hypnotized Canadian goodness?

No answer on the knee socks or the perils of getting lunch?

They're just socks! I just liked them! Help! Help! I'm being oppressed!

(And as for lunch...telling!)

Can't wait for the sex scene with Jacqui.  With all the posing she was doing the night before I admit that I probably wouldn't have held back.

Indeed! He's a better man than I am.

What is there to say about socks? Stripe-y socks rule.

Yeah! You tell 'im!

it's your ability to go beyond those limits that makes your work special.
As has been said before, that's what makes mindcontrolcomics better than the other sites: the writing.

Just thought these were worth reposting...'cause Daphne is awesome.


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: laguna85 on April 14, 2012, 07:39:06 am
I have to say all the writing for all the comice and movies is the Best


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: jmundt29 on April 14, 2012, 07:54:53 am
Well-earned kudos on the writing, and the artwork particularly on SJI is fantastic.  Three cheers for Daphne, PK, and Octavia! ;D ;D ;D

To be clear, I like the socks...they just seemed an odd choice for Erin.  Are they her clothing-tell?  For Jacqui, her current Ramones shirt is

1. a much lighter color scheme; and

2. a crop-top (Huzzah!) ;D ;)

That seems to be her wardrobe tell.  Although, perhaps this is an old shirt from before the time when dealing with hundreds of jerks like Derek forced her to develop a dark wall of jaded cynicism as a defense mechanism.

Of course, she could have gone out and bought that Ramones shirt at 3 AM after things cooled down at the Infirmary.  I think I'd like to meet the proprietor of an 24-hour clothing store specializing in classic rock themed apparel (especially given Wilmot's population).


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: powerpossum on April 15, 2012, 04:06:56 am
Three cheers for Daphne, PK, and Octavia!:D:D:D
We'll take 'em!

To be clear, I like the socks...they just seemed an odd choice for Erin.  Are they her clothing-tell?
She does appear to be dressed overall in a more cutesy, schoolgirly fashion than her personality would otherwise dictate...and those are pretty high heels for someone working at a second-hand record shop.

2. a crop-top (Huzzah!) ;D ;)
That seems to be her wardrobe tell.  Although, perhaps this is an old shirt from before the time when dealing with hundreds of jerks like Derek forced her to develop a dark wall of jaded cynicism as a defense mechanism.
Huzzah indeed! Whether it's an old shirt she had lying around, or a new one, it's certainly more revealing than anything she wore before A Dark and Stormy Night (although, to be fair, she was always a big shadow before then). And there's a lesson here, guys. Don't be jerks. Women will be less cynical, and therefore wear more crop-tops.

Of course, she could have gone out and bought that Ramones shirt at 3 AM after things cooled down at the Infirmary.  I think I'd like to meet the proprietor of an 24-hour clothing store specializing in classic rock themed apparel (especially given Wilmot's population).
Me too...when you put it like that, it seems like Jacqui should run that store, too.


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: laguna85 on April 19, 2012, 07:01:09 am
I was look at Adrian face when Erin is next to him.
I just see where her right hand is !
His member Himm
What will tomorrow will bring.


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: jmundt29 on April 30, 2012, 10:52:09 am
Um, two questions.

1. Is Mr. Bungle a band Adrian likes, or is this foreshadowing him getting into difficulty (or perhaps both?)?

2. What's the design on Erin's shirt?


Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 81: Performance Review
Post by: powerpossum on April 30, 2012, 03:25:56 pm
His member Himm

Got him right on the member. Without even looking. Erin rules.

And Erin's shirt is the cover of a Roxy Music Greatest Hits compliation. That's all you're getting outta me!