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Title: Saint James Infirmary #1050: “Class Is In Session” Post by: Daphne on May 06, 2021, 12:01:59 am (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/media/comics_promos/sji/sji-i1050.jpg) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/sji/i1050/preview)
Script: Daphne • Line Art: Plutonian Knight • Colors and Lettering: Octavia Moon Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary #1050: “Class Is In Session” Post by: Haight on May 07, 2021, 12:33:10 am Miel looks like she knows something just happened.
Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary #1050: “Class Is In Session” Post by: SDPunk on May 07, 2021, 03:47:33 am She looks like she knows what happened and isn’t buying this two person section bullshit
Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary #1050: “Class Is In Session” Post by: caseyx on May 07, 2021, 07:49:35 am Well obviously she knows something happened. This is supposed to be Adrian telling a story about what happened to his mother in college. He had to have heard it from them.
Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary #1050: “Class Is In Session” Post by: Haight on May 07, 2021, 11:21:15 am Well obviously she knows something happened. This is supposed to be Adrian telling a story about what happened to his mother in college. He had to have heard it from them. You'd think that, but it doesn't quite feel that way... but I guess this explains why Miel was able to pass the story along to Adrian that she was being mind controlled. The perspective in SJI is sometimes weird. It's third-person, but oftentimes we know less about what's going on than the characters in the scene. Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary #1050: “Class Is In Session” Post by: SDPunk on May 09, 2021, 06:56:59 am With all the mind control flying around, any scene without a controller, currently Adrian, Jakob, Yves, and Sawyer, that isn’t specifically from the controller’s perspective can be assumed to be told by an unreliable narrator.
I’m discovering this in my own writing as I’m closing I on 80k words is my own MC story. Anyone who is mind controlled is automatically unreliable. |