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Sometimes, you don't want to know the whole story…

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Script: William Pratt • Line Art: Don Lomax • Colors: Maksim Strelkov • Lettering: Hellica

Looks interesting

Oh nice! I got to beta read the script for this one for Mr Pratt, so I'm interested to see how it turned out  :)

Eh, mediocre art, ends with a woman being degraded into a sex worker. The story presents being a sex worker as degrading, that's not my commentary.

Not really hot.

Didn't read to me as "sex work is degrading" as much as "her views on men are degrading so now she's going to degrade herself for men."

Can anyone tell what it says under Gretchen on page 12?  It looks like "Show the bitch that fetch is happening," and I don't know what that would mean. 
I liked the story and wouldn't mind seeing more of it.

That's how I read it; I'm assuming it's a tease to a potential second issue. Possibly referring to puppy play?

I see Haight's point and I think I agree, but it wasn't a dealbreaker for me.

As an MD guy I'd be more interested in Mike's story if this series continues.

It's a pop culture reference from the movie Mean Girls.

http://gph.is/2eggPHn

Agreed.

I liked the story, but it felt like there was a page or two missing between 11 and 12. Nothing was ever done with "I obey"; what was that for?  And I don't really know if Tasha ever knew she'd been manipulated. On page 12, I think she was doing pretty much what she always does. And as a side note: of course there's a prison for whores.

I liked it! Art and coloring felt pulpy, and the effect worked for me.

I liked this one.