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Title: Hechizado Post by: Daphne on September 05, 2019, 06:46:05 pm Some mistakes can take a long, long time to make up for…
(https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/images/hechizado/i01/hechizado-i01-p00.jpg) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/hechizado/i01/preview) Script: Sadie Bella • Art: Gus • Lettering: George Zipp Title: Re: Hechizado Post by: joshbain on September 06, 2019, 01:48:45 pm :)
Title: Re: Hechizado Post by: macavity on September 06, 2019, 02:54:56 pm Definitely sounds more ...assertive... in Spanish
Title: Re: Hechizado Post by: Skyrender on September 17, 2019, 02:57:31 pm If I remember my high school Spanish lessons correctly, hechizado means something along the lines of bewitched, cursed, enchanted, etc. I guess we're in for a magic-themed story this week.
Title: Re: Hechizado Post by: lifmcs on September 18, 2019, 01:55:50 am That sure was a fun pastiche! The irony of man's best friend being A: actually a man, and B: now woman's best friend is delicious. Beyond that the setting, story, and art all worked well, adding up to some very *ahem* solid and lengthy content. Thank you for this!
Minor Criticism: Seeing the fun she had with Carmelita is nice and I understand the logic of inserting that page (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/hechizado/i01/p06) where it is, but without any sort of transition or overlap between it and the surrounding pages it took me a while to figure out I wasn't looking at an error. Also a few expressions seem off here and there, but barring those issues I quite like the art. It has a lot of character and hits far more often than it misses. Title: Re: Hechizado Post by: Haight on September 18, 2019, 01:59:56 am Seems like it's focused more on the voyeurism and cheating than the mind control.
Title: Re: Hechizado Post by: wcw43921 on September 18, 2019, 12:18:37 pm Not a fan of the femdom, but those who are will like it. Artwork is first rate; more from this Gus, please.
Title: Re: Hechizado Post by: GodWilling on September 18, 2019, 01:16:22 pm .
Title: Re: Hechizado Post by: DarkSpirit on September 20, 2019, 12:43:46 am EN:
I like it. I don't see so much a female dominant story. I think it's a long story for a single number. The story asks to narrate it more slowly besides focusing more on the inductions and sex scenes I think. ES/CAS: A mi me gusta. No veo tanto una historia female dominant. Me parece una historia larga para una solo numero. La historia pide narrarla mas despacio ademas de centrarse mas en las inducciones y escenas de sexo Vamos me parece a mi ;) |