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The Letters Page -- WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS => Rapid Inductions => Topic started by: Daphne on October 04, 2018, 12:01:19 am



Title: Rapid Inductions #39
Post by: Daphne on October 04, 2018, 12:01:19 am
(https://mindcontrolcomics.com/media/comics_promos/ri/ri-i039.jpg) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/ri/i039/preview)

Written by and Lettering: Daphne • Art: Octavia Moon


Title: Re: Rapid Inductions #39
Post by: laguna85 on October 05, 2018, 08:36:03 am
magic book.


Title: Re: Rapid Inductions #39
Post by: wcw43921 on October 08, 2018, 12:05:39 pm
Great work, as usual.  Keep it up.


Title: Re: Rapid Inductions #39
Post by: lifmcs on October 08, 2018, 06:32:20 pm
Forgive my criticism, but her expression is on the bland side and doesn't really jive with the text. Contrast this with basically the same scene (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/con_fused/i04/p07) in Con 'Fused. Her eyes show a good amount of intensity, but something more could have been done with her mouth. And I don't mean it should be wrapped around his dick just yet...