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Title: The Owners
Post by: Daphne on November 01, 2017, 02:14:37 am
A young couple has moved into a new building… and the owners of the flat across the hall are *very* excited to meet them.

(https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/images/owners_bonus/i01/owners_bonus-i01-p00.jpg) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/owners_bonus/i01/preview)


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: DeltaDelta on November 01, 2017, 03:07:38 am
This sounds hideously greedy when a write it out, but is the Bonus comic all we get today? It’s just that there is no sign of a main comic and it is a Wednesday…


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: Daphne on November 01, 2017, 03:17:22 am
This sounds hideously greedy when a write it out, but is the Bonus comic all we get today? It’s just that there is no sign of a main comic and it is a Wednesday…

Today, yes, but stay tuned! We're just running a little behind this week.


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: grimtidings on November 01, 2017, 05:12:48 am
I have a soft spot for plots like this.

It brought to mind Trash by Orestes (http://www.mcstories.com/Trash/Trash.html) because having a couple overtly dominated as a unit is relatively rare (we do get the odd partner MC'd to be ok with the "arrangement" but both actively serving?).

Also like that the owners appear to both be involved (not another beautiful woman MC'd by an old man) which reminded me of Poolside by Heimdall (http://www.mcstories.com/Poolside/Poolside.html).

Would have liked some words but the story comes across without them.

So the only thing I'll toss in as a (very soft) gripe is "why are the mind controllers (almost) universally beautiful people?" Without the eye spirals that comic could easily be interpreted as "The Employers". Replace the spirals with $$ and we just bumped into a twist on Indecent Proposal.


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: fdroosevelt on November 01, 2017, 05:42:53 pm
Can it be? Is this femdom where the dom isn't secretly brainwashed by some man?  :D Nothing against maledom, but it's nice to have some more variety. I don't think we've had this since that pirate story that tragically never got a sequel.


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: dwcomics on November 01, 2017, 07:02:05 pm
Well, at least they're enslaved together, instead of the usual breakup with the boyfriend or something.  I have to say, on the one hand I would love to see this in movie format, because it would make an interesting change of pace and could be a curious story.  But on the other hand, it is the sort of thing to make you hate yourself for your fetish because this young couple will likely never be able to make love or otherwise show affection for one another and they could eventually get separated permanently, if they decide to auction them off.  What do you think?


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: laguna85 on November 01, 2017, 09:42:56 pm
well slave are very big overhead
Pay there place
all there bills
food
on and on


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: Geo on November 01, 2017, 11:17:28 pm
Earl Grey tea for sure.


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: jmundt29 on November 02, 2017, 07:20:42 am
Download hyperlinks gone?  Or do we get them on the main site now?  Main site.  Whoops.  Sorry about that.

So, our owners are distinguished and experienced but still unfairly gorgeous.  Does that indicate some Ravella blood in their veins?  Their necklace totem seems to have a lot in common with the Michaels club pin.


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: madboy7931 on November 03, 2017, 04:54:15 pm
Can it be? Is this femdom where the dom isn't secretly brainwashed by some man?  :D Nothing against maledom, but it's nice to have some more variety. I don't think we've had this since that pirate story that tragically never got a sequel.
I agree! Some stories where the female is in charge of men would be great. The Help is half way there, but a woman using her “powers” to enslave men for sexual purposes or to even set up some sort of male whore house for other woman to use would be a great story. She would have to brainwash the guys with her boobs (al la The Waiting Room) or some other device. Just to shake up the normal theme is stories. Not that I don’t enjoy the current content, I do!!


Title: Re: The Owners
Post by: ozymandias on November 06, 2017, 11:26:39 pm
I think this was just perfect. And talk balloons wouldn't have added anything, in my completely humble (and almost always right) opinion.