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The Letters Page -- WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS => The Long Box => Topic started by: Daphne on May 25, 2017, 12:11:22 pm



Title: Seriously?
Post by: Daphne on May 25, 2017, 12:11:22 pm
Seriously.

(http://mindcontrolcomics.com/covers/seriously-p00.jpg)


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: lifmcs on May 25, 2017, 06:17:28 pm
srsly.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: Geo on May 25, 2017, 08:58:31 pm
Shirley nought.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: mr_ed968 on May 30, 2017, 09:13:55 am
Shirley nought.
Don't call me Shirley


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: mr_ed968 on May 30, 2017, 09:21:16 am
I guess I have to wait and see, but the tease cover reminds of Permed and the carnival comic. Should be interesting as always, I love the team of Daphne/SturkWurk!


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: madboy7931 on June 14, 2017, 12:30:59 am
Another really good comic! Love the art.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: raven on June 14, 2017, 04:29:19 am
I super enjoyed that. As always happens, I would love to see more.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: laguna85 on June 14, 2017, 06:33:42 am
I think : Mastermind plans is get a lot woman to be his Obedient slave
Serena after three when under unit should have know.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: lifmcs on June 14, 2017, 07:06:19 am
"That's it? Getting pussy? That's the plan?"

Checks out.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: Geo on June 14, 2017, 07:19:05 am
Seen worse plans.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: snivgrits on June 14, 2017, 11:26:35 am
The pictures won't seem to load for me. MacOS using Firefox, in case that makes any difference.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: Daphne on June 14, 2017, 11:26:57 am
The pictures won't seem to load for me. MacOS using Firefox, in case that makes any difference.

Your membership expired.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: jmundt29 on June 14, 2017, 11:47:29 am
Now comes the interesting question.  Did it work on her completely and this is her coping mechanism?  Are all of them experiencing the same disconnect?  Or is she unique and it actually doesn't work on her, but does work on them? Could she/would she just get up and walk away if she decided:  "Yup.  This bozo has no plan beyond getting laid."

The art was great and I really liked the story.  I too am interested in any potential sequel, but this works great as a one-shot too.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: snivgrits on June 14, 2017, 12:04:29 pm
Ah, I see. My bank helpfully decided that I shouldn't be looking at porn.

I think it's corrected now.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: Daphne on June 14, 2017, 12:05:20 pm
Ah, I see. My bank helpfully decided that I shouldn't be looking at porn.

They're very considerate in that regard.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: rdaneel on June 14, 2017, 02:47:46 pm
Very funny premise and execution, and very sexy too. I loved the texture of the heroine's costume.

Another vote for a sequel, but it works quite all right as a standalone too. Great work!


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: Haight on June 14, 2017, 03:28:01 pm
Seemed like it dropped off halfway through. There wasn't enough story there, really.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: sturkwurk on June 14, 2017, 03:45:42 pm
Now comes the interesting question.  Did it work on her completely and this is her coping mechanism?  Are all of them experiencing the same disconnect?  Or is she unique and it actually doesn't work on her, but does work on them? Could she/would she just get up and walk away if she decided:  "Yup.  This bozo has no plan beyond getting laid."

The art was great and I really liked the story.  I too am interested in any potential sequel, but this works great as a one-shot too.

Actually, I had the exact same question for Daphne when I read the script - and I put in a little hint for the answer.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: snivgrits on June 14, 2017, 05:09:01 pm
Now comes the interesting question.  Did it work on her completely and this is her coping mechanism?  Are all of them experiencing the same disconnect?  Or is she unique and it actually doesn't work on her, but does work on them? Could she/would she just get up and walk away if she decided:  "Yup.  This bozo has no plan beyond getting laid."

The art was great and I really liked the story.  I too am interested in any potential sequel, but this works great as a one-shot too.

Actually, I had the exact same question for Daphne when I read the script - and I put in a little hint for the answer.

A hint? What hint? Can you PM me if you don't want to broadcast it?


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: gromit on June 14, 2017, 05:49:22 pm
I wonder if we learn what his plan is in the next issue?


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: Geo on June 14, 2017, 09:19:30 pm
There is no plan. Or was it there is no spoon? Perhaps there is neither. Nothing but the ethereal night.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: dwcomics on June 14, 2017, 10:11:39 pm
Guess that's the best way to mind control someone.  Kind of a funny twist, all said; especially if the same can be said of the rest of the harem.  Just wish it had a bit more juice (in terms of story and sex) to go with that lovely meal, otherwise another well done comic that I hope can one day be expanded upon. 


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: kakyo01 on June 15, 2017, 02:02:42 am
Now comes the interesting question.  Did it work on her completely and this is her coping mechanism?  Are all of them experiencing the same disconnect?  Or is she unique and it actually doesn't work on her, but does work on them? Could she/would she just get up and walk away if she decided:  "Yup.  This bozo has no plan beyond getting laid."

The art was great and I really liked the story.  I too am interested in any potential sequel, but this works great as a one-shot too.

Actually, I had the exact same question for Daphne when I read the script - and I put in a little hint for the answer.

A hint? What hint? Can you PM me if you don't want to broadcast it?
my guess would be page 17 : "Two weeks later"

In the background is a picture showing a skyscraper(?) with "Certification 41xGOLD" and "CALC 2.430.530" highlighted. I think even with this type of "plan" visible to her and fulfilling her requirement of "knowing the plan" she just won't be able to actually see it. She's stuck in her 'plan-searching' loop.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: sytry on June 15, 2017, 03:53:39 am
I would have preferred a more serious approach to the superhero genre, though the villain's suit is hysterically terrible.

I gotta get off my ass and submit my superhero script proposal.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: Geo on June 15, 2017, 08:02:02 am
I gotta get off my ass and submit my superhero script proposal.
Mine has Knight Cat investigating the disappearance of sex trade workers while Ultra Lass tries to unravel who broke Rex Roboto out of prison and for what nefarious purpose.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: macavity on June 15, 2017, 03:40:47 pm
my guess would be page 17 : "Two weeks later"

In the background is a picture showing a skyscraper(?) with "Certification 41xGOLD" and "CALC 2.430.530" highlighted. I think even with this type of "plan" visible to her and fulfilling her requirement of "knowing the plan" she just won't be able to actually see it. She's stuck in her 'plan-searching' loop.
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Well spotted! The other two screens, showing LEO tracks around the earth and an 'Impact Area' are pretty suggestive of a dastardly plan in the making....


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: sturkwurk on June 20, 2017, 05:25:54 pm


A hint? What hint? Can you PM me if you don't want to broadcast it?
Sorry, I was out of town for the weekend... the hint I put in... was involuntary.


Title: Re: Seriously?
Post by: roughneck on June 22, 2017, 07:00:05 pm
Very good! I enjoyed the humorous twist on what is a very standard idea :)