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Title: Saint James Infirmary 23: Plan B Post by: Daphne on March 18, 2011, 01:36:22 pm It's up!
Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 23: Plan B Post by: Lightcycle on March 19, 2011, 12:55:39 pm First of all I love this page, fantastic piece of condensed story telling and hot as hell. Unfortunately it also highlights some of the issues with a weekly erotic comic in that a great sting page like this was preceded by two weeks of aborted buildup. I read a ton of webcomics and especially in ones where they only update weekly or less its important for them to be a little longer so that each issue can have a strong impact.
I only post this as a small piece of constructive criticism, I'd love to see more pages like this focused on advancing the plot/plus with the sexy/ rather then pages which are artistic and interesting to look at but were really single panel splash pages. now if a single update had both a splash art page AND a plot page thats the best of both worlds but also probably asking too much ;) Saint James Infirmary is probably my favorite of the pieces on the site due to its longer more involved story and i just really want to see that story advance at if not a faster clip then at least a steady clip. Title: Re: Saint James Infirmary 23: Plan B Post by: elbenton on March 19, 2011, 06:11:10 pm Writer's block is tough to get past.
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