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Some things are not mentioned in the disclosures...

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Any comments about what sort of kink is in this story beyond the usual MC? I'm guessing there's some BE/tf in her somewhere...

Well, given the author... :)

Might be a swimming pool involved as well.

The swimming in the pool change a female into a SEX doll shape and mind like a sex slave
What stuff did a doctor put in the water.

adding
What will the pool water do to a male?

Not a bad start and very easy to see a sequel in the near (?) future.  A guy just woke up to find his step-daughter's best friend is suddenly the perfectly shaped sex slave, just a matter of when and how he's going to get his wife and step-daughter into the pool and whether or not possessing a harem will tip off any consequences.  How about some scientists find out about the pool and try to gain access to it or get him out of their way to it?  Perhaps he rents the pool out for the price of a new addition to his harem or he ends up discovering other odds and ends left behind by the late Dr. Viagari?  This one has potential and I can only offer food for thought.

This actually makes HMB look conservative.

The concept is potentially interesting.  The art is...alarming.

Look like the Step-daughter all ready went in the pool. Jess is step-daughter

 Well, no--her complexion doesn't look as severe as the guest after the dip.  If she'd been in the pool, I don't think she'd be that coherent.  Of course we know nothing about how long the high lasts or if the subjects can still mimic their own personalities to encourage others to try the pool.  Plus, if this guy had already been through this with his step-daughter, I think his surprise would have been less extreme.

And just WHAT are you trying to imply, hmm?

The ladies you draw are just too damn FLAT to be even REMOTELY attractive, Harry. Thought you knew that.

I think the step daughter is supposed to just be naturally gifted in this comic. We haven't seen the mom, after all; it might just be good genes. That's very promising for when she actually *does* get in the pool, though. The art style is a bit extreme but it's best for be or tf stories to have stylized art, IMHO.

Mom?  :(

Forums are unusually bad for some forms of humor.

Forums and social media.

For this story at least, there seems to be only Park and Overdrive with nothing in between.

I thought it was pretty obvious that I was being mock outraged.

Anyways, liked the pool scene and use as an mcing/transformation device.

It's the combination of asynchronous communication and the lack of body language and tone. Almost a perfect storm of misunderstanding.


Wow. That was rather parental-sounding. In fact it reminds me of my mom's response when she first saw my ex. I was aiming more for my sister's response. I'll be more careful next time.

Anyway, this is porn. Go big or go home. This is just a bit bigger than I expected.

My work here is done.

Site's closed everyone, nothing left to accomplish here!

My whole purpose here was to not get a "too flat" out of Geo. Mission accomplished.

Anyway, this is a three-parter. Stay tuned.

My white whale.  :D

That'a a term of endearment I haven't heard before. :D

My god, I think I've been trolled!

Technically, "whaled."

So, it seems.  Now, for those of us who like the concept but find the art...startling, can I get an explanation of what happened here?

BillPratt wrote this and SAM drew it.  Was this in response to an idea Geo floated at some point, or a collaboration, or what?

How can this be? Geo is the Kwisatz Haderach!

But truthfully... Geo does not like posting on forums among friends under an assumed name, but his story writing is (and needs to be) easily googled. His non-porn professional life would frown on his hobby, ergo William Pratt. He also does not like writing of himself in the third person, but feels he must from time to time.

I suppose this is what I deserve for living with a woman who studies cetacean biology.

Don't worry, this was just a fluke.

Sorry, Geo.  I was unaware that William Pratt was your nom-de-plum.  I'm not sure what the previous exchanges portend for the art in volumes 2 and 3, but it does seem like it has real potential.

Hang on a minute...  William Pratt? James Whale?
This isn't all loosely based on an original concept from Mary Shelley is it?

Trust me Daphne, I'll be fin.

No, djb123. You're thinking the Bride of Boobenstein (still requires polish), which lead to spinning off Dr. Isaac Busten-Hansen who lead to an unpublished story about a pair of highway patrol officers I called Chips (A play on the 70's TV show and the lead female being implanted with an MC chip). That expanded into an idea I played with called Mad Scientist Monthly and the Cabaret of Doctor Viagari sprung from that. None of them ever really went anywhere, though I do intend to finish Vampires vs Mad Scientists one day.

This came out of a story pitch at the end of which Daphne asked why I didn't just pull out all the stops and throw in a boob-expanding pool.

That leads to the excellent question: Why is there a boob expanding pool? And that rolls back around to Mad Scientists. Dr. Viagari built it for the retirement home he never got to use.

So is Mr. Pratt MCC's Roy Thomas to your Stan Lee?  ;D

To misquote Diehard, "Was always kinda partial to Roy Thomas actually." Loved his Conan.